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Staging the Night

Alabaster staircase framing chandeliers Picassos, Renoirs, Van Goghs lining the walls Marble floors, dazzling in the starlight Polished perfection staging the Night Dainties, delicacies, tray after tray Sweetmeats, exotic fruits, more on the way Debonair men in their tuxes emerge from limousines Women goddesses wear sequined gowns, leggy queens Playboys, playgirls of the Riviera making the scene Jealousy left wondering what it all means

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Date: 8/15/2022 8:27:00 PM
I have nothing against people dressing up, being elegant nor having money. I just wish it were me, Gershon.))) Shallow people range from the poor to the wealthy. Nonetheless, this is a stunning write! I love your languaging”leggy queens”.))). The drooling desire to have their money is the root of evil. Money, in and of itself is not the root of evil. As if anyone desires poverty.l a horrid lie.You did not say that. People who whoa are a bit off, think so.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2022 8:36:00 PM
Oops. Don’t know what Happened.sheesh PR
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:28:00 PM
Enjoy your comments here, P. Keep that pen on the accelerator, Lady!!
Date: 8/15/2022 8:35:00 AM
Apt write! Yes, one might enjoy all the pleasures in life but be left bereft in the end.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:29:00 PM
Left bereft. Right! ~ Goodnight
Date: 8/14/2022 9:16:00 PM
Great observation Gershon the last line sums up the truth you so eloquently posed...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:29:00 PM
Hope it's not the 'last line' I ever write... Thanks, Michael.
Date: 8/14/2022 8:22:00 PM
Goodness, maybe I could have had a little of that if my legs had been longer. Is that what it means??? Thank you, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2022 8:29:00 PM
Ha, ha! I think that a sequined dress upgrade might have been required as well. lol. ~ Mr. Fashion Plate Himself, lemme tell ya!
Date: 8/14/2022 7:43:00 PM
I would like to see the paintings mentioned, the rest leaves me uncomfortable and bored. Enjoyed! Robert
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2022 7:55:00 PM
Sounds like this poem needs a paint job! Thanks, Robert. :) gw
Date: 8/14/2022 7:20:00 PM
If it means dressing up, count me out, free food or no!
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Date: 8/14/2022 7:10:00 PM
How true, gw. You've nailed it with this one!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/14/2022 8:31:00 PM
I'm gettin' my hammer out right now! Thanks, Milt. ~ Armin

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