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Stacked Up High

It is a wonderful apartment But, just comfortable for three, A surprise visit from relatives Soon turns into a catastrophe. Ouch watch out will you Cried from a young child, How do you find the space Seems they will be here awhile. Breakfast now requires shifts Lunch and supper do too, Lets not forget about bedtime Oh, just how to make it through. We pile them in one at a time Please, step over that one, Parents are under much pressure While the kid's thinks its fun. With time going by quickly Your guests will soon go, All the over crowding now gone You'll really miss it I know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/4/2008 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on having this one featured. Made me smile. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/13/2008 6:59:00 AM
Hello Jodie congradulations on your featured poem.This poem was somewhat humorous the more company the marrier. B BLESS Crystal
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Date: 6/12/2008 11:52:00 AM
this reminds me of my friends house she has 4 kids and living in a 2 bedroom apt between couches and floors thats what we do is step over them quietly lol now they gone time for you to get nerves back to par maybe a spa treatment great read thanks for sharing keep up the nice work congrats on this being featured
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Date: 6/10/2008 4:04:00 PM
Family is worth the inconvenience. This reminds me some of my family gatherings and has me smiling. Congratulations on being featured! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jodie on your true to life poem "Stacked Up High" being featured. Vince
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