Staccato Call

Symbols crashing on each side of the head;
One side magnificent, the other side, dread,

Violins play their calming current,
Bass and Cello raise anxious annulment

My caller is happy, but he carries both dire and grand news,
Someone precious, in trying to lose

Lose his youth, and play his own symphony fine,
By leaving his home a new conductor to find.

And then those who have sung in his learning choir,
Are left with strings broken, unclaimed desire,

From left piano keys black and white to the right,
They have been traveling through their own perilous night.

And then my caller  parts staccato with an I love you,
While the orchestra plays trembling a long night through.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Papyrus Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:43 PM
And we feel like, are you for real after what you've put me through. Musical words conducted that's heard as a symphony. This is brilliant!!!!
Wanter Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Vegter, that is a really nice comment, and I am tickled that you understood it.
Papyrus Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 6:46 PM
With a lil musical background, the keys on this piano caught me :)
Kiser Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Had to Fav, this is just beautiful; love the music metaphor.
Wanter Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Oh, thank you for reading and that fav.
Cresswell Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:55 PM
I can't decide if this is a long goodbye from a lover or a long lost lover calling To attempt a reconnection. Either way it is beautiful.
Wanter Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:29 PM
It's meant to express the extremes of (in this case, family) news received after a long time. Part of the news is someone quitting one life and changing to another, but not a goodbye. Thank you so much for your lovely comment.
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September 8, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Interesting poem... I dont know what to make of it....sounds like a sad goodbye...
Wanter Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 6:32 PM
My reply went south! LOL. It's expressing extremes of news, and included is someone making a complete change in their life, but not a goodbye. Thank you so much for your input!!!
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