Staccato

Hi,
    it's me...
what?
..say again
No..
   ok
       ..maybe
tomorow:
I'm fine
    with that..
no,
no,
   ...really!
why
   do
     you ask..
of course
        I will..
you
know
     I do
why?
   ..you
       need
          to
            hear it..
ok
I
   love
        you
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November 29, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Sweet one Brian :)
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November 29, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Prompted by a comment by a 'name' poet who noted we rarely speak in complete sentences.Thanks Heidi
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