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Stabbed In the Heart

I was amazed at how it felt No pain, no blood, no sorrow The Dagger used made my heart melt I held my breath like no tomorrow I wished to die, but she denied Said you are mine, forever and a day Till the stars fall from the sky I lived every breath, and seen the way She was a diamond in my sky I was her slave to her every wish I would never ask why If she was hungry i would lay upon a dish I would do everything in my power To keep her love every hour I can't stop to catch my breath Because you take it away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/3/2018 9:29:00 AM
Great poem about one sided love. Very well written capturing all the emotions and hurt. All the best~ Warren
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Billy Jones
Date: 11/3/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thank You Warren, I very much LOVED your comment< and may your life ALWAYS be Great!
Date: 9/25/2018 9:32:00 PM
Very nice, been stabbed many times!! LOL
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Billy Jones
Date: 9/25/2018 9:34:00 PM
same here hehe, just wished it was this good, thank you Art :-)

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