St Patrick

St. Patrick was a slave.
He escaped and then forgave.
He brought Christ’s holy word
To those who had not heard.
They had been his captors.
He saved them from terrors.
With shamrock plant in hand
He helped them understand
That God was very grand.
God is a Trinity
In His divinity.
God is filled full of love
For those born from above.
This thrilled the Irish so.
They were happy to know
No more fear in the night
That them a god might smite.
They embraced Jesus Christ
And found that He sufficed.
That is why to this day
We hold St. Patrick's Day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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mysore Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 12:24 AM
Beautiful write dear poet. Congratulations on your win, cheers!!!
Thomas Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked my stumbling work.
Mckeithan Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Lanier. Like the way you tell the true story of St Pat and why he came back to Ireland and how he explained the Trinity to the Celts.
Thomas Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 5:32 PM
Thank you for the 2nd place win!
Thomas Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Thank you very much. I am happy you like the poem. He was a great man of God.
Hargreaves Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 8:13 AM
Hi Lanier. I enjoyed reading your poem. Lovely - rhyming couplets and in trimeter. Enjoy St. Patrick's day, when it comes next Monday. Tony.
Thomas Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it. I just knocked it off quickly because some folks don't know who he was.
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