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St Elizabeth Jamaica

My day began with mommy making beef patties all morning I helped cutting the veggies for the curry soup while sipping ginger beer I remembered the curry for her special curry goat we were preparing for her sisters to visit from Trench town my head spending day dreaming about it anything other than our family tradition the Caribbean bakery we were the descendant no if ands or buts about granddad made home made gingerbread cookies while uncles peeled sugarcane the elders brought raw cocoa from the Mahogany trees coconut husks hung sparingly as we drank coconut milk while the storms brewed over the shanty town of Kingston the cock crowed throughout trench town as my cousins played keyboards and guitars in the street to the the sweetest sultutry sound of St Elizabeth infamous Caribbean beat In loving memory of Dad Caribbean Bakery 1539 Howard street Chicago Illinois..

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Date: 3/21/2024 8:35:00 AM
Yolanda! My goodness what an incredible masterpiece! A fav for me! Exalted in all the senses, human emotions and great Love!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/21/2024 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much sweetie many blessings.
Date: 3/20/2024 8:02:00 PM
Dear Yolanda, your rich, sensory imagery brought me to the center of your beautiful nostalgia and family tradition. I could feel the energy, love, joy and pride, and I reveled in it with you. Inspiring and splendid writing! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/21/2024 8:47:00 AM
Ah, such beautiful and fun experiences that built a collection of fond family memories.. what a treasure for all! Thank you for sharing this amazing tribute "in loving memory of Dad"
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/21/2024 1:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan I appreciate it this poem is a tribute to my Caribbean in laws actually my father in law but if he was still with us he'd always say I'm your Dad you're my daughter we never used the words in laws so many fond memories with my children and their Jamaican ancestors culture and heritage. Blessings
Date: 3/20/2024 7:47:00 AM
Hi Yolanda, Lovely poem. An observation about the poem's mood. "St Elizabeth Jamaica" portrays a warm and nostalgic atmosphere, reminiscent of family gatherings and traditions. The poem's imagery and sensory details paint a vibrant picture of Caribbean life, filled with the aroma of homemade delicacies, the taste of ginger beer, and the sounds of music drifting through the air. And yes, a sense of joy! Cheers, Don
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/21/2024 1:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Don I needed to do a warm tribute for my Jamaican in laws fond memories for my children their Caribbean culture and heritage .
Date: 3/19/2024 7:59:00 PM
Dear Yolanda, your poem is such a heartfelt tribute to family, tradition, and the rich cultural heritage of Jamaica. The imagery and nostalgic tone create a vibrant picture of everyday life infused with love, food, and music. I love that through your artistic words, you honor cherished memories and celebrate the enduring bonds that connect generations. Yolanda what a beautiful ode to the essence of home and the spirit of resilience embedded in Caribbean culture. - Blessings, Daniel
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 3/19/2024 8:27:00 PM
My son-in-law who is married to my middle daughter is Jamaican and so is both his mom and dad. A really lovely culture.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 3/19/2024 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Daniel I really appreciate it I truly enjoyed actually being able to give a warm tribute to my father in law and mother in law whom taught me the culture and customs of the Caribbean many blessings.

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