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Squirrels

Swinging through the trees, Gathering nuts for winter, Life is not a breeze. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/11/2014 9:40:00 PM
A cartoonesque haiku! What a great depiction of the struggle for food!
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Date: 10/8/2014 10:57:00 PM
Oh, I love your ending line. I think I did one on squirrels this year too. Wonderful.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/11/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 10/8/2014 4:22:00 PM
Very nicely penned Brenda! Love your haiku and the pretty pic too! ;) Hugs! Love peace and light! xxxx D.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/11/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Dorian
Date: 10/8/2014 5:54:00 AM
Pretty lines.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 10/8/2014 3:28:00 AM
Perfect haiku Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx The issue I have is the pic needs to be a red squirrel not a grey tree rat lol
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 9:02:00 AM
Oh my Jan, Canadian squirrels com in many colors.
Date: 10/7/2014 9:37:00 PM
Love the photograph.
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Date: 10/7/2014 9:36:00 PM
WoW one of the best I have ever read. I am such a big fan of your poetry. Another touch of brilliance.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/7/2014 9:55:00 PM
You are so kind Maurice. I am always honoured when someone enjoys reading my poetry. Thank you.

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