Squealing Brakes

Silent empty train,
Lush warm body presses mine
Slow down or derail

Eyelashes flutter
Blue eyes flash intense passion
Too late now, no brakes


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 20, 2010 at 9:12 AM
I love these two haikus.. It creates a lot of imagination..of intimacy indeed..beautiful..Charma
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