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Springtime Slumber

Cold frosty blanket Covers warm green blades of grass Waiting for the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2011 4:21:00 PM
lovely write Blaine, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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Date: 1/14/2011 7:09:00 PM
Watch your syllable count in the middle line-there are eight syllables in that line. Expunge "the" in that line and you're safe. Everything else looks good.
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Date: 1/14/2011 11:25:00 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Blaine. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 10:38:00 AM
Nice transition of the seasons you have worded so well, Blaine
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