Springtime Slumber

Cold frosty blanket Covers warm green blades of grass Waiting for the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 16, 2011 at 4:21 PM
lovely write Blaine, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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January 14, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Watch your syllable count in the middle line-there are eight syllables in that line. Expunge "the" in that line and you're safe. Everything else looks good.
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January 14, 2011 at 11:25 AM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Blaine. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 10:38 AM
Nice transition of the seasons you have worded so well, Blaine
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