Springtime Haiku

robin's happy song
sweet perfume of early bloom 
sight, smell, sound of spring




inspired by Carol's Springtime contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 9, 2009 at 1:50 PM
Beautiful haiku Joyce, the imagery is great and the theme is perfect...Raul
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January 22, 2009 at 6:52 AM
This makes me wish for the spring now. Lovely in imagery and form. Michael
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January 21, 2009 at 6:46 PM
Beautiful spring..my heart is ready to move on from the cold.Wonderful Haiku.
Winter Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Absolutely delightful. Feel like I am in the midst of a gorgeous Spring day! Good luck! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 4:53 PM
Thank you Joyce, for catching my misspelled train. (Fright train would be rather funny! :)
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January 21, 2009 at 4:41 PM
How could one not feel better after reading this??? Nicely done....Good luck with this lovely haiku in the contest!!~ Love, Carrie
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