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Springtime Haiku

robin's happy song sweet perfume of early bloom sight, smell, sound of spring inspired by Carol's Springtime contest

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Date: 3/9/2009 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Joyce, the imagery is great and the theme is perfect...Raul
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Date: 1/22/2009 6:52:00 AM
This makes me wish for the spring now. Lovely in imagery and form. Michael
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Date: 1/21/2009 6:46:00 PM
Beautiful spring..my heart is ready to move on from the cold.Wonderful Haiku.
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Date: 1/21/2009 5:30:00 PM
Absolutely delightful. Feel like I am in the midst of a gorgeous Spring day! Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/21/2009 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Joyce, for catching my misspelled train. (Fright train would be rather funny! :)
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Date: 1/21/2009 4:41:00 PM
How could one not feel better after reading this??? Nicely done....Good luck with this lovely haiku in the contest!!~ Love, Carrie
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