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Springtime By Monet

A nail goes in the barren wall to bring the spring alive I can almost hear a bird that begs a morning sun to rise There's a garden now between my palms, and dew within my eyes The fog lifts high and drifts away, and clouds that hover high While butterflies, and bumble bees, bring color, oh, so grand Addressing spring, caressing things, a rainbow in my hands. I glimpse, as if through windowpanes, and fall in love anew Enchanting me with roses, red, that bloom around my head A cottage quaint, with paint of gold has cheered me from the blues Such charm invites my soul to rest, in shades of Monet hues From nature is a vast array, of color, by the best I wish to hold the magic long, to frame, to keep, ... to last
__________________________________________________________________ Inspired by "Springtime By Monet" For Ekphrasis Contest Sponsored By Rick Parise 1/5/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your awesome 12 liner Ekphrasis WIN! :) SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 1:13 AM
What a lovely colourful write Carrie,, congrats on big win!
Onclaud Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 1:00 AM
this has a most lively tone to it, carrie.. big congrats on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 7:37 PM
Carrie, I think your poem expresses a beauty even finer than the painting. It speaks to a poet's heart, and mine is saying I love this poem and it is going into my favorites. Your words and this painting meld together in breathtaking art!
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:54 PM
Ah Carrie, I was at Monet's cottage & all we could do is stare from the road. It was closed for winter and the bus would not stay long enough for us to walk to the lily pond! Damn I should have just run for it! Didn't occur to me until now to be naughty!Should have been much higher. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:23 PM
The imagery is so clear and beautiful, I don't need the picture to see the painting...congrats, Carrie! Hugs, Rhonda
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:32 PM
stunning image and imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Walker  Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 6:17 PM
Spiritually profound with beautiful meaning inside. I have enjoyed this poem Carrie. Thanks for sharing... Verlenad
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a winning work to me..Way to go for this contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Stoner Jr Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 7:11 AM
very nice Carrie loved your poem,good luck in the contest
Dhaou Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 3:56 AM
Gorgeous piece Carrie Richards pregnant with sublime images ! I really delighted ! Bravo !
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Beautiful pen Carrie! I love your piece springtime by Manet dear friend. A 7 from me! Best wishes to you in 2015! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Smith Avatar
January 5, 2015 at 8:34 PM
Beautiful....one of my all time favorite paintings...you did it justice with a fabulous poem...a fav...hugs Tim
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