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Springtime Beauty

rainbow spreads its wings
carpeting wide verdant fields
brushing up all trees
to arc like pink cotton sweets
critters boast their cheering pitch


March 8, 2022  6:42pm




Springtime Beauty Tanka Poetry Contest
Contest Judged:  4/8/2022 6:23:00 PM
Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser
Place: 4

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/10/2022 9:35:00 AM

Congratulations on this win. Your words paint a beautiful write. Enjoy your win and spring day with blessings.................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/8/2022 9:52:00 PM

"like pink cotton sweets" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2022 8:58:00 PM

So lovely. Congrats for the win