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Springtime.

Tiny buds awake
Sweet fragrances fill the  air 
The breath of Angels.

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Lena Townsend

April 28, 2009 at 4:06 PM

A beautiful write. Congratulations on your win in the Springtime contest. It is well deserved. Smiles from Lolita

Kat Crane

April 28, 2009 at 11:27 AM

Such delicate imagery. Perfect. Congratulations on your win. Kat

Constance La France

April 28, 2009 at 9:55 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Raul Moreno

April 28, 2009 at 9:33 AM

Congrats on first place in the contest Margaret...Raul

Brian Strand

April 28, 2009 at 8:56 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Meg .Rgds Brian

Trudy Diane Rider

April 28, 2009 at 8:36 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning the Spring Hiaku! ~Trudy

Carrie Richards

April 28, 2009 at 8:16 AM

Congrautulations, Margaret for the wonderful winning poem, and God Bless you as you go through this difficult time. Will keep you in my thoughts and prayers. ~ Carrie