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Springtime

She wraps herself now
in dress of fine greenery
welcoming the spring.

She paints the flowers
in magical  colored hues
floral paradise.

The new buds of spring
bring forth the pussy willow
signs of early spring.

Crocus on the hills
stretch to seek the morning sun
first flower of spring.





For Carols contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/13/2011 12:40:00 PM
I simply cannot find a new poem to comment on. I'll just return and say this is one of your prettiest nature poems, PHyllis. thanks for your comments and the news of what is going on in your life. It would be fun to meet in person one day!
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:15:00 PM
hello, Phyllis! how are you and thanks for the smile today... enjoyed this one again,,, and good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 3/13/2011 10:20:00 AM
you are like an artist,painting pictures with words
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:00:00 AM
thankxx Phyllis for your lovely comments on my contest entries.. they are a breath of spring time to me my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:08:00 AM
a well written art, well done.
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Date: 3/2/2011 10:56:00 PM
BTW, a big thanks for the heads up on my one poem's typo!
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Date: 3/1/2011 3:06:00 PM
Reads like winning material to me..Such emotive work expressing the desire for spring to show her face..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your kind review was so encouraging..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2011 5:09:00 AM
Wonderful Spring senario here!Congrats on your 1st place win Phyllis---kashinath
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Date: 3/1/2011 4:03:00 AM
I love the imagery in this poem. Cheers, Norma :)
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:29:00 PM
Gosh Phyllis, I thought I had seen all the poems on your page. When did you get this delightful one up? A big congratulations to you on a well deserved win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:10:00 PM
lovely imagery, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:03:00 PM
Simply lovely, Phyllis. Many congrat's on your FIRST PLACE win. Lainie
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Phyllis
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:13:00 AM
Hello Phyllis, How beautiful this is Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:52:00 AM
It's great to see you at the top Phyllis, with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2011 7:05:00 AM
Congrats Phyllis my friend on your first place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry so full of imagery and warmth.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Phyllis. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:40:00 PM
The woman in this poem must be Mother Nature. Very, very nicely done, Phyllis. Best wishes in the haiku contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:58:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to portray the season. I can't wait for spring my favorite season. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 2/25/2011 1:08:00 PM
Nice personification with beautiful visuals created by apt images, Phyllis
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Date: 2/25/2011 9:13:00 AM
how dainty is this entire piece.. much enjoyed with best of winning luck,phylis... ho[e you can check mine as well called " hot season haikus".. hugggs, nette
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