Springtime

Springtime unfolds mystic winsome, Vibrant rainbow blossom to come Idyllic redolence fragrance. Song retold on garden pleasance. Error-less scents so admired thrum. Springtime unfolds mystic winsome, Dawn lightens fanciful golden Purples, pinks, greens, quaint and olden. As the fields tiny blossoms hum, Sweet and tender jewels' outcome. Springtime unfolds mystic winsome, Where yet forbear spider hides from. Dandelion fluff dance across Green grass spirit free and crisscross, Budding in and upon beach-plum. Springtime unfolds mystic winsome. 2/8/2024

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2024 12:50:00 PM

You got some really good rhymes in this quatern, Eve. And all very close sounding ending mostly with M. Lovely imagery

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/8/2024 9:31:00 PM

Oh my, what an ethereal and enchanting poem this is, beautiful Eve.. Your wordsmithery is so eloquent with perfect mellifluous flow that creates a magical cadence.. "Springtime unfolds mystic winsome" Love that! "Dawn lightens fanciful golden Purples, pinks, greens, quaint and olden" Ah, the use of colours is absolutely mesmerizing! Your rhymes are impeccable too. Loved reading this. Sending you many best wishes and light, always :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/8/2024 4:55:00 AM

Much enjoyed the spring imagery, Eve. I love this form--so well delivered!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/8/2024 2:06:00 AM

I don't know the rules for this form but loved the poem with its repetitions. Admired your diction and imagery. Hugs.