Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Springtime

Springtime touch unfolds veracious winsome,
colorful rainbow blossom to come.
Tranquil redolence fragrance,
a ballad narrated on carpet grass pleasance.

Crisp dawn enlightens fanciful golden
colors, of purples, pinks, greens, quaint and olden.
Blends float and dance amongst the valley
outstretch, toward enraptured abbey.

Glorious hanging ivy, juniper, kiss
me not plants, all in a garden's vast bliss.
As the fields blossoms quince to thirst
sweet and tender jewels among all to burst.

7/28/2021

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Paula Goldsmith August 9, 2021 at 10:19 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative Springtime story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Joseph May August 9, 2021 at 6:51 AM Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win

Rama Balasubramanian August 9, 2021 at 4:37 AM Beautiful creation! Congratulations!

Dyuti Biswas August 8, 2021 at 6:19 PM This is indeed beautiful as the Spring. Congrats on your win. Love, Dyuti

Vijay Pandit August 8, 2021 at 4:54 PM Congrats, Eve, on your win in Joseph's contest.

Alexis Y. August 8, 2021 at 3:34 AM WoW! Eve, Spring is my favorite season of the year. You captured it very well in your written write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger August 7, 2021 at 5:35 PM Your imagery brings spring to a full new glorious height!

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 28, 2021 at 8:49 PM This is so pretty, Eve, and the imagery takes me away. This is a fave for me. Good luck in the contest. :)

Gershon Wolf July 28, 2021 at 6:06 PM These 'alpha' lines are the alpha AND the omega of sensually appealing poetry, as far as I can perceive, Eve. Gorgeous penning. ~ Gershon Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:36 PM Thank you, Gershon, I am truly glad you and others like it. I really haven't been in the mood for writing.Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2021 at 4:33 PM It looks like you did great here. I really need to check out this contest and see how people are coming up with the alpha lines. Does he give them to us?? Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:35 PM Thank you, Andrea, you have been a great support. He explains with an example. I have been staying away from a lot of the contest.. Hugs Eve

Phyllis Babcock July 28, 2021 at 12:01 PM I always look forward to spring and all the colourful flowers it brings. Nice descriptive poem of spring. love phyl Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:34 PM Thank you, Phyllis, for your inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve

Panagiota Romios July 28, 2021 at 8:16 AM Best wishes Eve..on a finely done Poem I love SPRING....ahhhh! Panagiota Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:33 PM Thank you, Panagiota, that means a lot to me . Hugs Eve

Constance La France July 28, 2021 at 7:48 AM Eve, your springtime poem is delightful, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:32 PM Thank you for the luck and love, Constance, you have been a great support. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus July 28, 2021 at 3:42 AM Springtime does your garden good, Eve. Those colours would surely attract anybody's attention. Alas, summer tries to undo all th egood work done....it's so hot now, and I have to water my plants twice a day! Hugs // paul Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:32 PM Thank you, Paul, I too, seem to be watering my plants more often, but they are still surviving. Hugs Eve

Tom Cunningham July 28, 2021 at 1:23 AM The season everyone looks forward to after a long cold winter. Good luck Tom Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:31 PM Thank you, Tom, cool air after this warm summer would be a pleasure. Hugs Eve

Supraja Kannan July 28, 2021 at 12:08 AM "Sweet and tender jewels among all to burst", such a beautiful imagery... Lovely write for the contest, Eve... Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:30 PM Thank you, Supraja, for the wonderful encouragement. Hugs Eve

Victor Buhagiar July 27, 2021 at 10:35 PM Your garden is a great one endowed with the best flowers. Best for a win. Beautiful. Hugs. Eve Roper July 28, 2021 at 8:29 PM Thank you, Victor, you have been a great support. Hugs Eve