Springtime

Springtime touch unfolds veracious winsome,
colorful rainbow blossom to come.
Tranquil redolence fragrance,
a ballad narrated on carpet grass pleasance.

Crisp dawn enlightens fanciful golden
colors, of purples, pinks, greens, quaint and olden.
Blends float and dance amongst the valley
outstretch, toward enraptured abbey.

Glorious hanging ivy, juniper, kiss
me not plants, all in a garden's vast bliss.
As the fields blossoms quince to thirst
sweet and tender jewels among all to burst.

7/28/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/9/2021 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative Springtime story/write. Love It. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Joseph May

Date: 8/9/2021 6:51:00 AM

Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/9/2021 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful creation! Congratulations!

Dyuti Biswas

Date: 8/8/2021 6:19:00 PM

This is indeed beautiful as the Spring. Congrats on your win. Love, Dyuti

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/8/2021 4:54:00 PM

Congrats, Eve, on your win in Joseph's contest.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/8/2021 3:34:00 AM

WoW! Eve, Spring is my favorite season of the year. You captured it very well in your written write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 5:35:00 PM

Your imagery brings spring to a full new glorious height!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/28/2021 8:49:00 PM

This is so pretty, Eve, and the imagery takes me away. This is a fave for me. Good luck in the contest. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/28/2021 6:06:00 PM

These 'alpha' lines are the alpha AND the omega of sensually appealing poetry, as far as I can perceive, Eve. Gorgeous penning. ~ Gershon

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:36:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon, I am truly glad you and others like it. I really haven't been in the mood for writing.Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2021 4:33:00 PM

It looks like you did great here. I really need to check out this contest and see how people are coming up with the alpha lines. Does he give them to us??

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, you have been a great support. He explains with an example. I have been staying away from a lot of the contest.. Hugs Eve

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/28/2021 12:01:00 PM

I always look forward to spring and all the colourful flowers it brings. Nice descriptive poem of spring. love phyl

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:34:00 PM

Thank you, Phyllis, for your inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/28/2021 8:16:00 AM

Best wishes Eve..on a finely done Poem I love SPRING....ahhhh! Panagiota

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:33:00 PM

Thank you, Panagiota, that means a lot to me . Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 7/28/2021 7:48:00 AM

Eve, your springtime poem is delightful, best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:32:00 PM

Thank you for the luck and love, Constance, you have been a great support. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2021 3:42:00 AM

Springtime does your garden good, Eve. Those colours would surely attract anybody's attention. Alas, summer tries to undo all th egood work done....it's so hot now, and I have to water my plants twice a day! Hugs // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 7/28/2021 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, I too, seem to be watering my plants more often, but they are still surviving. Hugs Eve