Springtime

What a most amazing day
see spring flowers on display 
shining brightly, their array
charms in every single way!

On this blessed day in May
birds build nests without delay 
see the ground squirrels as they play
hummingbirds are here to stay. 

Butterflies flit round the hay
busy bumblebees won’t stray
feel the new tree branches sway
life is born anew today. 




Written on 3/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 4:10 PM
a delightful springtime monorhyme Laura:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 5:15 PM
wonderful monorhyming!!! The A rhyme sound is a very good one to go with. I went with E I think.
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 8:14 PM
A bright and cheerful poem, Laura. Well done.
Cunningham Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 1:05 PM
What a beautiful rhyme and season too. Tom
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Terrific Monorhyme Laura, a real feel good write...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Sweet uplifting throughout!
One Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 6:00 AM
I'm still waiting for spring... Lovely poem Laura..
Pandit Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Beautiful nature imagery in your words..enjoyed reading your upbeat poem, Laura.
Godwin Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 1:34 AM
A delightful breath of Spring. I sure am ready! All the best ... CayCay
Barden Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 11:13 PM
So joyous and optimistic - I needed a ray of sunshine, Laura ... wonderful write! I have yet to try a monorhyme, but perhaps soon - I love challenges! Blessings, friend! :-) <3
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