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Springtime

What a most amazing day see spring flowers on display shining brightly, their array charms in every single way! On this blessed day in May birds build nests without delay see the ground squirrels as they play hummingbirds are here to stay. Butterflies flit round the hay busy bumblebees won’t stray feel the new tree branches sway life is born anew today. Written on 3/8/2018

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Date: 4/8/2018 4:10:00 PM
a delightful springtime monorhyme Laura:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2018 5:15:00 PM
wonderful monorhyming!!! The A rhyme sound is a very good one to go with. I went with E I think.
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Date: 3/9/2018 8:14:00 PM
A bright and cheerful poem, Laura. Well done.
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Date: 3/9/2018 1:05:00 PM
What a beautiful rhyme and season too. Tom
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Date: 3/9/2018 10:51:00 AM
Terrific Monorhyme Laura, a real feel good write...
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Date: 3/9/2018 7:27:00 AM
Sweet uplifting throughout!
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Date: 3/9/2018 6:00:00 AM
I'm still waiting for spring... Lovely poem Laura..
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Date: 3/9/2018 5:30:00 AM
Beautiful nature imagery in your words..enjoyed reading your upbeat poem, Laura.
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Date: 3/9/2018 1:34:00 AM
A delightful breath of Spring. I sure am ready! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/8/2018 11:13:00 PM
So joyous and optimistic - I needed a ray of sunshine, Laura ... wonderful write! I have yet to try a monorhyme, but perhaps soon - I love challenges! Blessings, friend! :-) <3
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