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Spring's Wisp

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                    Softly
               Spring’s wisp
              strolls tenderly

                    Sullen
              slowly moving
             singing songs of

              Spring’s bright
             Spring’s warmth
Spring’s buds stringing along mine
                     sight 

                     Sadly
               Spring’s snow
                Slowly prods
                Spring’s wisp

               Surreptitiously  
        Spring’s wisp aches for
                   Spring’s  
                     strip

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2013 3:09:00 PM

Great alliteration..Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, should be in the top..Sara

Jack Jordan

Date: 4/26/2013 7:42:00 AM

Sneaking up on spring... That's the way it seems to work lately. Good work... Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2013 2:27:00 PM

Oh, your pen drips of gold.. this is well written in such flowing motion... great stuff, james.. nice to read you again after my long absence..:) huggs!