James Peranteau Poet Alliteration

Spring's Wisp

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                    Softly
               Spring’s wisp
              strolls tenderly

                    Sullen
              slowly moving
             singing songs of

              Spring’s bright
             Spring’s warmth
Spring’s buds stringing along mine
                     sight 

                     Sadly
               Spring’s snow
                Slowly prods
                Spring’s wisp

               Surreptitiously  
        Spring’s wisp aches for
                   Spring’s  
                     strip

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Sara Kendrick April 28, 2013 at 3:09 PM Great alliteration..Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, should be in the top..Sara

Jack Jordan April 26, 2013 at 7:42 AM Sneaking up on spring... That's the way it seems to work lately. Good work... Jack

Nette Onclaud April 21, 2013 at 2:27 PM Oh, your pen drips of gold.. this is well written in such flowing motion... great stuff, james.. nice to read you again after my long absence..:) huggs!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 20, 2013 at 8:05 AM This is Beautiful Pen... More power to the pen... Well done~A.O

Daver Austin April 18, 2013 at 6:06 AM The illusive spring, eh? Amazing how it comes on so suddenly - a regular explosion of green. Good to hear from you Sir James

Seosamh De Burca April 16, 2013 at 12:54 PM Excellent and I echo the comments written below, all most serpentine as your poem weaves its way through the mind.

Harry Horsman April 11, 2013 at 8:50 AM i just love this form of poetry and you do it so well James...

Charmaine Chircop April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM I love this Spring aliteration James.Happy Easter to you and Noah

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2013 at 3:58 PM This makes for very lovely alliteration, James!! And so you are apt. searching in NY? Oh, my, just what does a small apt. there go for nowadays?

Carrie Richards March 30, 2013 at 7:20 PM Beautifully written, as if it could be set to soft music!! :)