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Spring's Whisper

Spring’s tender whisper 

Thawed, old winter’s frozen heart, 
 
Flowers jumped for joy!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
  03 MARCH 2015

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David Meade

Date: 3/3/2015 6:01:00 PM

the spirit of spring wind bringing a resurrection of color and life . . . well captured my dear brother. 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2015 7:13:00 AM

How right you are my friend, David! Spring is the resurrection of nature which is so inspiring! Sunday last, when visited a hill covered by Anemones and saw the beauty of the fields covered by myriad flowers, inspiration was kind to " dictate" this Haiku to me! Thank you, my brother, for visiting and commenting!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/3/2015 5:55:00 PM

So charming Demetrios..I love it

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2015 7:14:00 AM

Thank you, Tim, my friend for your gentle visit and comment!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2015 2:52:00 PM

They are cheering for joy, dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 2:55:00 PM

That too my dear, Eve! Than k you for your kind visit!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2015 2:08:00 PM

A great spring poem. I really enjoyed this one.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 2:57:00 PM

Since Spring has arrived here, I was not unaffected dear, Andrea! It is so nice to receive your visit and lovely comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/3/2015 12:42:00 PM

One of your best...Then exo allo na po...Afou...ole epan afto pou thelo na po....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 1:00:00 PM

You so kind my dearest, Eileen! Efxaristo poly! Filakia! Nice Avatar!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/3/2015 10:29:00 AM

Wow. Perfection in every line, from the premise of spring's tender whisper, thawing old winter's frozen heart...to the resolution, flowers jumped for joy. Did you just hear a whole orchestra come to that fever pitch moment, sire? 7 and to the favs! I ache to make something like this one! Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 10:33:00 AM

No, I did not hear it, but I saw the blooming hills dressed with myriad Anemones of different colors thus the inspiration came! Thank you for your poetic comment, dear Kim! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2015 5:18:00 AM

- It's me :)))) - Beautiful, I see your image (from yesterday) .... and it fits perfectly to your words, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 7:50:00 AM

Exactly, my dear friend, Anne-Lise! The inspiration came when I visited the blooming fields on Sunday! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/3/2015 2:25:00 AM

I'm jumping for joy reading this - so beautiful Demetrios:-) 7 xxx Hugs jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 7:48:00 AM

Very good dear, Jan! If I am the cause of your jumping, the poem must have some value! Thank you very much!

David Furlong

Date: 3/3/2015 1:12:00 AM

The thought of Spring causes our spirits to rise. I can see the flowers in my garden 'Jumping for Joy'. Great line Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2015 7:45:00 AM

David, my friend, thank you so much for visiting and commenting! Hope the Spring will be there soon!

Spring's Whisper

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