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Spring's Whisper

Spring’s tender whisper 

Thawed, old winter’s frozen heart, 
 
Flowers jumped for joy!





© Demetrios Trifiatis
  03 MARCH 2015

flowerjoyspringhaiku

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David Meade

March 3, 2015 at 6:01 PM

the spirit of spring wind bringing a resurrection of color and life . . . well captured my dear brother. 7

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 4, 2015 at 7:13 AM

How right you are my friend, David! Spring is the resurrection of nature which is so inspiring! Sunday last, when visited a hill covered by Anemones and saw the beauty of the fields covered by myriad flowers, inspiration was kind to " dictate" this Haiku to me! Thank you, my brother, for visiting and commenting!

Tim Smith

March 3, 2015 at 5:55 PM

So charming Demetrios..I love it

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 4, 2015 at 7:14 AM

Thank you, Tim, my friend for your gentle visit and comment!

Eve Roper

March 3, 2015 at 2:52 PM

They are cheering for joy, dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 3, 2015 at 2:55 PM

That too my dear, Eve! Than k you for your kind visit!

Andrea Dietrich

March 3, 2015 at 2:08 PM

A great spring poem. I really enjoyed this one.

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 3, 2015 at 2:57 PM

Since Spring has arrived here, I was not unaffected dear, Andrea! It is so nice to receive your visit and lovely comment!

Eileen Manassian

March 3, 2015 at 12:42 PM

One of your best...Then exo allo na po...Afou...ole epan afto pou thelo na po....

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 3, 2015 at 1:00 PM

You so kind my dearest, Eileen! Efxaristo poly! Filakia! Nice Avatar!

Kp Nunez

March 3, 2015 at 10:29 AM

Wow. Perfection in every line, from the premise of spring's tender whisper, thawing old winter's frozen heart...to the resolution, flowers jumped for joy. Did you just hear a whole orchestra come to that fever pitch moment, sire? 7 and to the favs! I ache to make something like this one! Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 3, 2015 at 10:33 AM

No, I did not hear it, but I saw the blooming hills dressed with myriad Anemones of different colors thus the inspiration came! Thank you for your poetic comment, dear Kim! Thank you!