Spring's Vision

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      The green’s growth is soon
                   to come
       as sure as the sun’s shine
                ‘pon us heat

                       Yes
           the distended vision
  this truly is when this soul knows
         the flower did so bloom

And how I devour the flower's scent
                      so do I
             the flower's bloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/16/2012 8:18:00 AM
yes JP.....I agree w/Ruben.....last stanza memorable! to mine faves! jimbo
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Date: 4/10/2012 4:30:00 PM
wow, here is a lovely oldie of yours I had not seen yet and it's even got a spring title!
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Date: 4/1/2012 12:56:00 PM
Hi James, just checking to find out what has happened to you. Need another of those wild romantic thingies you do so well. How are you and Noel?
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Date: 3/20/2012 3:02:00 PM
Hello old friend. Do hope you are enjoying the scent and bloom. LOve, daver
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:22:00 PM
Spring is almost here, can't wait for the blooms to come and light my world. How are you James? :)
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:57:00 AM
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Date: 2/20/2012 3:56:00 AM
After every cold Winter,a flower blooms in Spring scenting our life's garden-lovely post James,as sweet as ever the words of a poet...Charma
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Date: 2/17/2012 5:57:00 PM
Yes, how I wait to devour spring and all her lovely gifts. Your distended vision reaches out to captivate me James; always something special waits for me here!
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Date: 2/12/2012 11:41:00 AM
good afternoon James, i like the way you used devour the flower scent.. my nose has an appetite to feed on intriguing smells... enjoyed your poem.. have a nice and wonderful valentine's day..always..pd
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