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Take a leisurely stroll in the pine grove. The time of rejuvenation has begun. A light drizzle will do, as will a shady cove. The whole area is revitalized by the sun. As a string of pearls around a slim neck. Puddles decorate a tree in the rain. Soon, the hands of the earth will bedeck. anything that is visible to you, without pain. Bestow your awareness forward. And be in awe of the strength. Inhale the floor sweet aroma onward. That lingers after a bath or shower length. Listen as the ground absorbs the rain. From deep roots to boldest tips, a joy to gain Buried life rises and dies on the ground. Warmth is all nature needs to astound!
Written: May 28, 2023

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Date: 5/29/2023 8:46:00 AM
This leisurely stroll through the pine grove is so delightful with a gentle drizzle wetting the leaves and the soil. It is so cooling. A lovely poem quite soothing and enjoyable.
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Date: 5/28/2023 2:31:00 PM
Much enjoyed the leisurely stroll through your eyes and power of your pen. Much beauty and serenity in this sphere of spring. Lovely poem my friend.
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