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Spring's Race

Poking buds through grass
Daffodils racing Tulips
Capturing our smiles


Written for Carol’s contest

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James Fraser

May 26, 2009 at 2:16 PM

Bright spring theme, full of colourful gleam, has to be seen, on natures screen, lovely poem, James

Lena Townsend

April 28, 2009 at 4:12 PM

A creative way to look at the wonderful actions of Spring. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Trudy Diane Rider

April 28, 2009 at 11:27 AM

Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

April 28, 2009 at 10:55 AM

Congratulations in placing in Carol's contest! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

April 28, 2009 at 9:36 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Kat...Raul

Leon Wilson

April 25, 2009 at 2:24 AM

Congratulations Kat on your Haiku being featured. Fully deserved. God Bless. Leon

April 22, 2009 at 8:19 AM

Just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

April 21, 2009 at 8:52 AM

Congrats Kat on your haiku being featured. Vince

Abe Lopez

April 20, 2009 at 8:53 PM

Kat, Congrats on having your poem featured!

Sharon Winter

April 20, 2009 at 3:49 PM

Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 20, 2009 at 2:57 PM

What a delightful Haiku you have written. God bless you. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week... Always, Dane

Sue Mason

April 20, 2009 at 9:30 AM

Capturing our smiles and your wonderful haiku captures the heart, Kat. Wonderful write to be featured this week and Welcome to PoetrySoup!! Good luck in the contest and congratulations on the feature!!

Ernilando Tugaff

April 20, 2009 at 3:21 AM

Kat, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Mine is also featured. Ernilando

Raul Moreno

April 19, 2009 at 10:18 PM

Kat, congrats on your feature...Raul

Michael Jordan

April 19, 2009 at 11:36 AM

Kat I wish you the best in the contest - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Brian Anderson

April 18, 2009 at 4:55 AM

this is such a playful piece it is perfect for spring.

Nadia Shahwan

April 16, 2009 at 12:47 PM

Beautiful....Should it be: Capturing soft smiles (7 cyllab) since our is sung as o..ur because you did not type ou' instead. I like this haiky. all the best.