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Spring's Promise

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Spring, a time when nature promises seedlings to stretch out their roots firmly embed deep into earth soil for nutrients and water. Eyes of envy upon the world's soul and mind as nature resumes its loveliness. Love in the air of dancing aromas of fresh budding flowers filling the air. The sun's kiss and smell of rain that bath Nature's inflorescence meadows in the afterglow before the blooms fade and all forgotten. Spring brings new feelings and emotions when just stepping outside, breathing life and enjoy beautiful reborn scenery. Sounds of birds in the trees and shrubs. Animals become active with more abundance of food, feelings of love, joy, hope, and growth. fair dandelion vision swaddle in raindrops comely butterfly 3/26/2021 Poetry Contest: Springtime Haibun Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

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Date: 3/27/2021 12:16:00 AM
Perfect Haibun. Loved the description and the perfect haiku.
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Date: 3/26/2021 9:14:00 PM
Hello Eve, although I’m not very familiar with this poetry form I do like it. Lovely photo too. John
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