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Spring's Progression

In early spring some days are cold, for winter’s loath to break its hold, still sending winds that bite and sting. Some days are cold in early spring. Late April’s here. The earth’s alive. Green grass, full trees, and flowers thrive. Sunshine and birds’ songs bring us cheer. The earth’s alive. Late April’s here. Comes June’s debut with longer days and rising heat. To summer’s ways we soon must bid sweet spring adieu. With longer days, comes June’s debut. July 11, 2020 entered in the Strand Brand New Poem Contest, 8 Placed 1st

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Date: 7/16/2020 5:33:00 AM
Wonderful. Well penned. Congrats on your top win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2020 7:40:00 AM
Patri, thank you so much. Janice
Date: 7/15/2020 6:12:00 PM
Hi Janice. You have perfectly described the season of spring and early summer. I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 7/12/2020 2:21:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/12/2020 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. Janice
Date: 7/12/2020 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful write Janice, GL in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/12/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
Date: 7/12/2020 9:41:00 AM
Great rhyme and read Janice and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/12/2020 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gary. Janice
Date: 7/11/2020 8:59:00 PM
G'day Janice … spring really is a mixture of cold and warmth; calm and turmoil; sun, rain and storms, but it provides colour, new life and a lift to leave winter behind. Well done Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thanks, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 7/11/2020 2:51:00 PM
What happened between April and June? Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/13/2020 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! It seems May doesn't really matter! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 3:01:00 PM
Time flew! Thanks, Rico. Janice
Date: 7/11/2020 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful glimpses of spring transitioning to summer--enjoyed the rhythm of your swap quatrain, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/11/2020 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice

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