Spring's Mystique--Split Haiku

lavender florets
sway their hems to a gold wind...
as
queen bee jiggles


aisle of lush gardens 
invite morn's jaybirds on flight...
coo
cooing sweet tunes


dew bathes newborn plants
evergreen their christened ribs...
from
heaven's blessings


such bright assemblage
displays lush April's glory
when 
spring thrills charmed hearts




MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKUS Contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose
4/10/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend for your win with this beautiful haiku. Loved always, bl
A   Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your "MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKU win." ~LINDA~
Lane Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Well done and congratulations, nette.
May Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 6:16 AM
A lovely write...Congrats on your win
Cheema Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Awesome, Nette!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:09 AM
Congrats on a worthy win with these superb haikus nette..
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:34 PM
yours was so cute and inventive. Good to see it again , BIG congrats.
Haight Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Sweet imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Nette, a beautiful split haiku, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Nette, your creative imagery with words always amazes me! Wonderful set of haikus here! Good luck in the contest :)
Maverick Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:37 PM
A really strong spring write from you Nette, So many aspects to enjoy..' hope all is well there, Joe..
May Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Love the first one...great write Nette
Gasun Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:54 AM
Chain of precious gems my dear friend, Nette! Super 7 and fave. Thanks a lot for sharing! Have a great day! love lots and big hug, lorry
Gasun Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:56 AM
Thanks a lot also for stopping by on my poem. God bless!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:24 AM
These are lovely Nette. I hope you had a nice Easter. I haven't attempted this contest. #7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 3:36 PM
love how you did yours, Nette. VERY nice.
Galson Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Lovely images! Serenity!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:18 AM
What a beauty nette.. Sure winner..best wishes
Turner Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 9:55 PM
I want to live in your world! You paint a beautiful picture with your words. Peace my friend:)
Allison Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:15 PM
you painted such glorious images Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Beautiful! I just want to stay in your poem and smell the flowers and enjoy the scene :) :)
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