Spring's Melody

Morning's breeze is filled 

With melodious spring sounds 

Envious Mozart!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
       22 March 2017

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/24/2017 6:22:00 AM

I wish you many melodious spring mornings my friend while you write in your rooftop garden.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/23/2017 9:03:00 AM

My Dear Demetrios, You have written volumes in ten words....Yes, Wolfgang would indeed be envious! A7 , my best to you, chuck

Chris Green

Date: 3/22/2017 12:38:00 PM

Now this is a beautiful spring morning poem. Nicely done my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/22/2017 3:41:00 PM

Well , my friend, Chris, I try to keep up with your beautiful poetry but to no avail. Thank you so much!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/22/2017 10:01:00 AM

Wonderfully well said ... A7 ... but the sceptic in me hesitates and finally musters the courage to ask humbly if the spring sounds felt envious at resplendent Mozart ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/22/2017 3:48:00 PM

What an intringing question my friend , Probir! Now my turn to ask: Is it possible the eternal spring to envy the fleeting Mozart? Who has inspired whom? Mozart the spring or Spring Mozart? Thank you my friend. Your comments always a challenge!