" SPRING'S RUPTURE " MY PHOTO, ©
After an epic struggle, Shivering earth slowly escaped winter's icy grip And She threw herself into the arms of the awaiting sun That Welcomed her with the caresses of its ardent rays Which Thawed land's frosty garments-replacing them with Spring's flowery gown! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 March 2021
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