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Springs Forth Spring

A season to delight, to sing and thrive Birth of spring beckons new life Casting aside the winter nights Dancing gay the flowers bloom Endless days of soothing clime From the trees the wind chime Grasses lush and green grow tall Hotter days soon to follow Igniting the passion strong Joining in the lovers song Kites brought out by children gay Lurking ice soon melts away Moist soil that promise growth Never doth such time come oft Over the hills the sun emerge Promising the awaited warmth Quivering underneath its touch Rosebuds kissed by hungry bees Sucking at the lingering beads To fill their need for sweetness deep Unfolding the rainbow stretch Vast corn fields flourish much Water taking silent course to sea Xanthic carpet beneath the tree Yonder lies the clear blue sky hued Zenith of happiness is procured © Nadiya (14 Feb '15) Placed 3rd in the contest 'abecedarian' by Shadow Hamilton on 27 Feb 2015.

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Date: 3/10/2015 3:43:00 PM
Nad.. You know how to paint girl! From form to word choice to spacing.. Many congrats!
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:38:00 PM
Thank you very much Dear friend.. you have been a great support through out...
Date: 2/28/2015 7:29:00 PM
I just loved the presentation of yours with the double spacing and the bold print on the ABC's. Wonderful and Congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.. smiles :) :)
Date: 2/28/2015 8:23:00 AM
Wonderful write and a wonderful win, great job ;)
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Casarah :) appreciate your visit and wishes
Date: 2/28/2015 1:49:00 AM
A wonderful win for this difficult form Posey. You created a lovely vision! Congrats!
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Date: 3/11/2015 2:40:00 PM
thank you very much Connie... hugs...
Date: 2/27/2015 11:21:00 PM
nice win. SKAT
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Skat
Date: 2/27/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Eve
Date: 2/27/2015 2:17:00 PM
The ABC’s have danced the spring dance and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats …Sara
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara.. nad
Date: 2/27/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hi Nad, a big congratulations to you for your nice win for your lovely poem about Spring! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:19:00 AM
Thank you dear Sandra... appreciate your comments... hugs
Date: 2/27/2015 7:15:00 AM
good attempt at this hard form Poesy congrats on placing 3rd
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:18:00 AM
Thank you for the contest and the challenging form.... nad
Date: 2/27/2015 6:36:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nadiya:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 2/28/2015 12:18:00 AM
Thank you dear Jan... nad
Date: 2/16/2015 2:09:00 AM
It is the first time in my life that I regret that the letters in the alphabet are so few, dearest Nad!
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:33:00 AM
Thank you demetrios... thats one of the best compliment I have received... lov,nad...
Date: 2/15/2015 10:49:00 AM
Such wonderful visions of our much longed-for Spring you have created in this beautiful poem, Nad! Your words flow so smoothly in this difficult form. I am sure it will do exceptionally well in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra for your lovely words... always appreciate your visit... nad
Date: 2/14/2015 7:43:00 PM
Dear Posey, Love these positive reflections of the spring to come, I can't wait to see your vision to come full forward and are arrives at last, I'm sick of this cold and winter, we are getting blasted here by Artic winds tonight and a major temperture drop but your words will give me dreams of warmth tonight thanks for that, cheri
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:17:00 PM
Oh Cherl.. I am happy that my humble pen made you dream of spring and its comfort... appreciate your visit.. lov , nad
Date: 2/14/2015 7:22:00 PM
Poesy, your Spring poem is wonderful for the contest, best of luck, did you find this form difficult, I did and thanks so much for the visit ~~
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:16:00 PM
Thank you dear... yes it was a bit difficult to follow a set pattern... hav a great weekend.. nad
Date: 2/14/2015 3:20:00 PM
Amazing beauty and brilliantly creative.. Just wow!
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you Dave my friend;)
Date: 2/14/2015 1:55:00 PM
- Yes, really beautiful dear Nadiya !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:11:00 PM
Thank You dear Anne-Lise.. appreciate your visit and comments...lov,nad!
Date: 2/14/2015 1:36:00 PM
Beautifully creative Nadiya a delightful read - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Jan, my ever supportive friend... lov, nad!