Spring's First Heartbeat

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Contance's Three Beautiful Lines Contest ~ March 6, 2025

"Spring's first heartbeat honors Winter's last breath." ~ Angie Westland Crosby When Winter finally rests her weary head on a pillow Spring smiles and warmly welcomes it as her cue To wake sleeping crocus bulbs and buds on willows

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2025 1:09:00 PM

Lovely ~

Lin Lane
Date: 3/12/2025 1:42:00 PM

Thanks, Line.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/8/2025 7:37:00 PM

Lin, it's clear you have seen the signs in the past. It is something we all look forward to. We have lilly sprouts that have come up in the past few days. It's a real pleasure to see these transitions. Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/12/2025 1:42:00 PM

I'm seeing the first signs of Springs birthing now, Duke. The new buds, robins arriving, pollen covering everything! lol I wish I had a garden to see flower sprouts coming up. Thanks for your comments and smiles, Duke.