Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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Contance's Three Beautiful Lines Contest ~ March 6, 2025

Spring's First Heartbeat

"Spring's first heartbeat honors Winter's last breath."
                                    ~ Angie Westland Crosby


When Winter finally rests her weary head on a pillow
Spring smiles and warmly welcomes it as her cue
To wake sleeping crocus bulbs and buds on willows

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Line Gauthier March 12, 2025 at 1:09 PM Lovely ~ Lin Lane March 12, 2025 at 1:42 PM Thanks, Line.

Duke Beaufort March 8, 2025 at 7:37 PM Lin, it's clear you have seen the signs in the past. It is something we all look forward to. We have lilly sprouts that have come up in the past few days. It's a real pleasure to see these transitions. Smiles!! Lin Lane March 12, 2025 at 1:42 PM I'm seeing the first signs of Springs birthing now, Duke. The new buds, robins arriving, pollen covering everything! lol I wish I had a garden to see flower sprouts coming up. Thanks for your comments and smiles, Duke.

Kai Michael Neumann March 8, 2025 at 3:51 AM Beautiful ...XXX Lin Lane March 8, 2025 at 4:17 AM Thanks ever so kindly, Kai.

Terry Miller March 8, 2025 at 2:26 AM A very pretty image you have create here, congratulations Lin Lane March 8, 2025 at 4:17 AM Thank you very much, Terry.

Frederic Parker March 6, 2025 at 4:26 PM so much said in three lines, the beauty of Spring...good luck in the contest, dear poet Lin Lane March 6, 2025 at 4:47 PM Thank you very much for your thoughts and well wishes. Frederic.

Tania Kitchin March 6, 2025 at 3:23 PM Lin, a beautiful Spring poem, love the imagery of the crocus bulbs and and buds on willows. Lin Lane March 6, 2025 at 4:45 PM This is your kind of poetry… very Haiku-ish. Thanks, Tania.

Jerry Brotherton March 6, 2025 at 1:37 PM A wonderful entry to the contest, my friend. Lin Lane March 6, 2025 at 4:43 PM Thanks, Jerry. I appreciate your thoughts.

Tom Cunningham March 6, 2025 at 10:46 AM Beautiful three liner Lin, warming up here now, flowers starting to rise again. Good luck in the contest. Tom Lin Lane March 6, 2025 at 4:43 PM Thank you very much, Tom. It’s been warm here, then cold then… roller coasters weather.