Spring's Essence Floats

spring's soft essence floats filling the air with perfume none matches your scent my apple tree in the pines your sweet blossoms spring to life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sivey Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 6:27 AM
Wow, now this is a Tanka, a very delightful write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal poem here this morning! You impressed upon me by the splendor of this incredible piece, Great Work!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 6:33 PM
very spring like, Sara. the last line is so fitting.
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 3:26 PM
lovely tanka - Congrats on your wins, too, my friend
Onclaud Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 1:43 PM
so joyous and full of verve, sara... i can feel spring through you splendid tanka!.. huggs
Melugin Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Yes! Love this essence Sara! 7 my best, chuck
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