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Spring's Bestowing

No longer snowing
The sun is glowing
The rains ongoing
Daffodils growing
Crows crowing
Winds blowing
Rivers overflowing
Children helloing
Frisbee throwing
Much more outgoing
Farmers ready for sowing
Gardeners hoeing
Neighbors easygoing
All soon will be lawn mowing



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on March 8, 2018

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CayCay Jennings Date: 3/9/2018 8:09:00 AM Clever, fun and a blast to read. Though you used brevity (one of my fav things), strong imagery was delivered. All the best in contest and all else ... CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 3/9/2018 12:43:00 PM Oh, but brevity is most effective when used as you have, please don't think I meant your poem was 'lacking' for in no way would that be true. If you wish a re-write, by all means, but I meant the poem was strong in imagery, as well stance. We okay? Line Gauthier Date: 3/9/2018 11:48:00 AM Yes, I know very brief. I might come up with a replacement for the contest, we'll see. Thanks for your visit and kind comment.

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/8/2018 12:59:00 PM Lovely monorhyme Line Good luck Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/8/2018 2:38:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/8/2018 12:41:00 PM You describe the region where I live perfectly; I am thinking you are from the Midwest, which delights me somehow. Nice job! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/8/2018 12:47:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. I'm from Ottawa, Canada.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/8/2018 11:55:00 AM Great Monorhyme! Well done :) Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 3/8/2018 12:41:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi.