Line Gauthier Poet Monorhyme

Spring's Bestowing

No longer snowing
The sun is glowing
The rains ongoing
Daffodils growing
Crows crowing
Winds blowing
Rivers overflowing
Children helloing
Frisbee throwing
Much more outgoing
Farmers ready for sowing
Gardeners hoeing
Neighbors easygoing
All soon will be lawn mowing



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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CayCay Godwin March 9, 2018 at 8:09 AM Clever, fun and a blast to read. Though you used brevity (one of my fav things), strong imagery was delivered. All the best in contest and all else ... CayCay CayCay Godwin March 9, 2018 at 12:43 PM Oh, but brevity is most effective when used as you have, please don't think I meant your poem was 'lacking' for in no way would that be true. If you wish a re-write, by all means, but I meant the poem was strong in imagery, as well stance. We okay? Line Gauthier March 9, 2018 at 11:48 AM Yes, I know very brief. I might come up with a replacement for the contest, we'll see. Thanks for your visit and kind comment.

Tom Cunningham March 8, 2018 at 12:59 PM Lovely monorhyme Line Good luck Line Gauthier March 8, 2018 at 2:38 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger March 8, 2018 at 12:41 PM You describe the region where I live perfectly; I am thinking you are from the Midwest, which delights me somehow. Nice job! Line Gauthier March 8, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. I'm from Ottawa, Canada.

Heidi Sands March 8, 2018 at 11:55 AM Great Monorhyme! Well done :) Line Gauthier March 8, 2018 at 12:41 PM Thanks for your visit and comment, Heidi.