Spring's Angular Sun

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Image result for pictures of an early morn in spring

Spring's angular rising sun 
Cast shadows upon the plants
The still air carries spring sounds 
Roosters' crows, doves' coos, deers' pants

There's been no rain for about a month
Puddles have dried , springs survive
The creeks still run to the river
Plants and wildlife seem to thrive 

I'm thankful for continuity
God takes care of His own
His creation hasn't ended so far
It's on a path and has grown

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/31/2022 9:39:00 AM

Wise words and a lovely Rhyme poem, Sara. Blessings my friend, Bill

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/19/2022 4:08:00 PM

This is lovely Sara, again the visual is perfect.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2022 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. I appreciate the visit. I am glad that it is a perfect visual. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/18/2022 10:42:00 AM

Love the imagery in your verse Sara, so true, God takes care of his own. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2022 2:25:00 AM

Tom, I do believe He cares for all of His creation but there are guardian angels who He assigns to each believer. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/18/2022 9:42:00 AM

Beautiful inspirational thoughts.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2022 2:20:00 AM

I am glad it was so to you. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/18/2022 9:25:00 AM

Such a well-penned poem, Sara. Your rhythm and the whole diction are great and that shed more enchantment on your poem. Blessings

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2022 2:17:00 AM

Thank you, Sotto. I appreciate the visit. Sara