Springku 6 5 19

descend steep driveway — the noisiest bunch of squirrels foliage battlefield
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Faulkner Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 6:42 PM
I can relate - squirrels are running amuck in my neighborhood, but I love them!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 9:18 PM
We love them as long as they stay out of our walls! We have a strobe light in our attic to keep them out so either it’s working or we have a party in our attic :)
Ashley Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:02 PM
A foliage battlefield, indeed! I can relate to your lively imagery, Kim. Great Haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Startled by amazing Spring happenstance! Thank you, Susan!
Michael Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 3:58 PM
Clear the way I'm coming through...Nice imagery...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:28 PM
LOL...for sure! Thanks, Arturo!
Allison Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 7:47 AM
great imagery Kim, we don't have squirrels on our Island but I can picture the scene so vividly:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 9:47 AM
They scared me...I was like what is that... as my heart scurried away. LOL. Thank you!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace