Springku 6 5 19

descend steep driveway — the noisiest bunch of squirrels foliage battlefield

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/6/2019 6:42:00 PM

I can relate - squirrels are running amuck in my neighborhood, but I love them!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2019 9:18:00 PM

We love them as long as they stay out of our walls! We have a strobe light in our attic to keep them out so either it’s working or we have a party in our attic :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/5/2019 9:02:00 PM

A foliage battlefield, indeed! I can relate to your lively imagery, Kim. Great Haiku! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 10:28:00 PM

Startled by amazing Spring happenstance! Thank you, Susan!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/5/2019 3:58:00 PM

Clear the way I'm coming through...Nice imagery...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 10:28:00 PM

LOL...for sure! Thanks, Arturo!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/5/2019 7:47:00 AM

great imagery Kim, we don't have squirrels on our Island but I can picture the scene so vividly:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2019 9:47:00 AM

They scared me...I was like what is that... as my heart scurried away. LOL. Thank you!