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Springing In Questions

what will you feel
when you see
the summer 
smiles their brightness
through portulaca and verbena

what will you hear
when spring comes
and flutters with
their daylight wings
through swallows and thrushs

what will you dream
through the bloomy twilights
till
the wet dews welcome 
your new day

share me 
not
those mournful stories

sing me
not
those sad songs

what will you answer
when you read
this
springing questions

~(c) Sukmawati Komala~
Feb 2014

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Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/24/2014 11:20:00 AM

l like the positive images you created through the use of such words as "twilights", "daylight" and "brightness"- Sukmawati. This an inspiring poem.

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 12:56:00 AM

thank you deary Ndaba.. appreciate so much your vist and support.. may you always have a blessing day.. :) Sk :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/15/2014 4:00:00 PM

your poetry is like the sun rise, welcomed by all to whom reads it... this is an exceptional poem,,,

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 12:57:00 AM

thank you deary Harry.. such a blessing day to read your lovely comment and visit.. appreciate so much :) much love and light <3 please always take care :) Sk

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2014 9:44:00 PM

Reading this one again, it is perfect, and fits the days ahead. I hope you are well, and will post another poem soon. Summer is waiting for poets like you... always~ Linda

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 12:58:00 AM

hi dearest Linda... time flies...spring after spring and here another summer is coming.. i am so happy to see you again.. and such a blessing to have your supports and visit.. much love and big hugs far off <3 please take care <3 Sk

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/26/2014 9:54:00 PM

Wonderful perspective on nature and thoughts!! Miss reading your work! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/14/2014 11:23:00 PM

Hi Sukmawait, Happy valentines.... Thanks for the epic and deep twilight. Sending you smiles, I don't mind the summer smiles... Linda

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 12:59:00 AM

hi dearest Linda.. i am so happy to read you back... such a blessing... appreciate so much your support and spirit... Happy Valentine to you as well <3 much love and big hugs forever <3 Sk

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2014 2:38:00 AM

A great and wonderful poem of yours which I enjoyed this afternoon my very dear friend and sista SK. Thank you so much for sharing your lovely write. I'll come back to read more. Thank u so much also for stopping by on my poems and your nice comments. I'm so sorry if I've stopped by only now for my expression of gratitude. Was so busy & just arrived home fr. 3day Camp. I want to greet u & ur loved ones A Happy Valentines Day! "love and miss u sista, Leonora

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 1:00:00 AM

thank you deary sista Leonora.. i am so glad to you read you as well <3 much love and peace <3 big big hugs far off.. please take care.. will read your beautiful pen more.. <3 :) Sk

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2014 8:43:00 PM

i'll feel the fear is gone. the cold has passed and threaghtens us no more. and once again the world will live. and once again the world will live.

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 4/25/2014 1:01:00 AM

dearest John.. such a blessing to read your great comment.. and i am happy to know you are well :) indeed we will live.. much love and light :) take care :) Sk

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2014 7:39:00 AM

Oh!! I say let spring come with a flourish like never before..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 2/11/2014 7:28:00 PM

thank you deary Sara :) my best wishes for you as always <3 luve and peace <3

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 2/11/2014 3:27:00 AM

Huh, I guess my answer would be I'm open to possibilities. We can only think that we know how we'll react to a scenario even one we are familiar with but the thing with feelings is that they are erratic, one needs to be in that particular moment to realize the essence of it. Well penned.

Sukmawati Komala
Date: 2/11/2014 7:29:00 PM

thank you dear friend Vicky for your inspiring answer :) have a wonderful day :)