Sukmawati Komala Poet Dramatic Monologue

Springing In Questions

what will you feel
when you see
the summer 
smiles their brightness
through portulaca and verbena

what will you hear
when spring comes
and flutters with
their daylight wings
through swallows and thrushs

what will you dream
through the bloomy twilights
till
the wet dews welcome 
your new day

share me 
not
those mournful stories

sing me
not
those sad songs

what will you answer
when you read
this
springing questions

~(c) Sukmawati Komala~
Feb 2014

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Ndaba Sibanda April 24, 2014 at 11:20 AM l like the positive images you created through the use of such words as "twilights", "daylight" and "brightness"- Sukmawati. This an inspiring poem. Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 12:56 AM thank you deary Ndaba.. appreciate so much your vist and support.. may you always have a blessing day.. :) Sk :)

Harry Horsman April 15, 2014 at 4:00 PM your poetry is like the sun rise, welcomed by all to whom reads it... this is an exceptional poem,,, Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 12:57 AM thank you deary Harry.. such a blessing day to read your lovely comment and visit.. appreciate so much :) much love and light <3 please always take care :) Sk

Poet Destroyer A March 12, 2014 at 9:44 PM Reading this one again, it is perfect, and fits the days ahead. I hope you are well, and will post another poem soon. Summer is waiting for poets like you... always~ Linda Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 12:58 AM hi dearest Linda... time flies...spring after spring and here another summer is coming.. i am so happy to see you again.. and such a blessing to have your supports and visit.. much love and big hugs far off <3 please take care <3 Sk

Gwendolen Song February 26, 2014 at 9:54 PM Wonderful perspective on nature and thoughts!! Miss reading your work! :)

Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2014 at 11:23 PM Hi Sukmawait, Happy valentines.... Thanks for the epic and deep twilight. Sending you smiles, I don't mind the summer smiles... Linda Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 12:59 AM hi dearest Linda.. i am so happy to read you back... such a blessing... appreciate so much your support and spirit... Happy Valentine to you as well <3 much love and big hugs forever <3 Sk

Len Gasun February 14, 2014 at 2:38 AM A great and wonderful poem of yours which I enjoyed this afternoon my very dear friend and sista SK. Thank you so much for sharing your lovely write. I'll come back to read more. Thank u so much also for stopping by on my poems and your nice comments. I'm so sorry if I've stopped by only now for my expression of gratitude. Was so busy & just arrived home fr. 3day Camp. I want to greet u & ur loved ones A Happy Valentines Day! "love and miss u sista, Leonora Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 1:00 AM thank you deary sista Leonora.. i am so glad to you read you as well <3 much love and peace <3 big big hugs far off.. please take care.. will read your beautiful pen more.. <3 :) Sk

John Loving Iii February 12, 2014 at 8:43 PM i'll feel the fear is gone. the cold has passed and threaghtens us no more. and once again the world will live. and once again the world will live. Sukmawati Komala April 25, 2014 at 1:01 AM dearest John.. such a blessing to read your great comment.. and i am happy to know you are well :) indeed we will live.. much love and light :) take care :) Sk

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2014 at 7:39 AM Oh!! I say let spring come with a flourish like never before..Great work..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Sukmawati Komala February 11, 2014 at 7:28 PM thank you deary Sara :) my best wishes for you as always <3 luve and peace <3

Vicky Tsiluma February 11, 2014 at 3:27 AM Huh, I guess my answer would be I'm open to possibilities. We can only think that we know how we'll react to a scenario even one we are familiar with but the thing with feelings is that they are erratic, one needs to be in that particular moment to realize the essence of it. Well penned. Sukmawati Komala February 11, 2014 at 7:29 PM thank you dear friend Vicky for your inspiring answer :) have a wonderful day :)

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2014 at 10:36 PM such a cute way to use springing at the end!! As always your imagery is enchanting, sweetie. Sukmawati Komala February 11, 2014 at 7:26 PM thank you deary beloved Andrea :) :) :) sending you a big big hugs... <3 much love and peace <3