Spring Winds

Mother nature ,shakes her head,
and sheds , white vestiges ,
of Winters rein.
Willowy stalks ,with buds of green,
bring forth , flowers,
to break the chain.
Flitting here then there,
a nest of Robins,
in Spring time airs.
Chirps ,shrills,fill the wood
songs a tribute,
of lifetime pairs.   
Oh ,out of the west,
a tempest,
a mild wind blows.
Clothed in ,new colors,
warmed of the wind,
the Maple who knows.
Breathing,in the fragrance,
of life ,
exploding to the ends.
Enjoying ,the kiss,
touched ,
by Spring time winds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 23, 2010 at 8:25 PM
Good use of imagery--enjoyed reading it again. Saw your name online tonight. Hope you will be posting more poetry soon. Can't wait for spring! Karen
Taylor Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 12:32 PM
bravo excellent write I feel the breeze flowing ever so gently
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August 28, 2009 at 1:19 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Jim. lainie
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July 24, 2009 at 8:23 AM
That first wind of spring great reflection and great write. it moves so very well great job
Bird Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 7:31 PM
Ah! yes, the lovely spring time, everything in bloom with its radiant colors. you paint a vivid picture Jim. enjoyed the write!
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April 24, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Jim, This is beartiful. It read as though the words were floating on the breeze. Very nice. Did you enter this one in the member's contest about the seasons? If not, It's beautiful. I would chek it out. Good luck. Keep writing. Always, Dane
Winter Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 1:45 PM
Ah, I can feel the gentle breeze of Spring. Magical ~ as are your words. This is written by someone completely enchanted by the season. Enjoy. Love, Shar
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April 21, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an uplifting view. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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