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Spring Winds

Mother nature ,shakes her head, and sheds , white vestiges , of Winters rein. Willowy stalks ,with buds of green, bring forth , flowers, to break the chain. Flitting here then there, a nest of Robins, in Spring time airs. Chirps ,shrills,fill the wood songs a tribute, of lifetime pairs. Oh ,out of the west, a tempest, a mild wind blows. Clothed in ,new colors, warmed of the wind, the Maple who knows. Breathing,in the fragrance, of life , exploding to the ends. Enjoying ,the kiss, touched , by Spring time winds.

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Date: 2/23/2010 8:25:00 PM
Good use of imagery--enjoyed reading it again. Saw your name online tonight. Hope you will be posting more poetry soon. Can't wait for spring! Karen
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Date: 10/14/2009 12:32:00 PM
bravo excellent write I feel the breeze flowing ever so gently
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:19:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Jim. lainie
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Date: 7/24/2009 8:23:00 AM
That first wind of spring great reflection and great write. it moves so very well great job
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Date: 4/24/2009 7:31:00 PM
Ah! yes, the lovely spring time, everything in bloom with its radiant colors. you paint a vivid picture Jim. enjoyed the write!
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Date: 4/24/2009 5:01:00 PM
Jim, This is beartiful. It read as though the words were floating on the breeze. Very nice. Did you enter this one in the member's contest about the seasons? If not, It's beautiful. I would chek it out. Good luck. Keep writing. Always, Dane
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:45:00 PM
Ah, I can feel the gentle breeze of Spring. Magical ~ as are your words. This is written by someone completely enchanted by the season. Enjoy. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:36:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an uplifting view. Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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