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Spring Vs Summer

Spring rainy, cool awaking, flowering, singing yards, mountains, sea, sand swimming, picnicking, sunning hot, fun summer Date Written 1/12/2023

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 2:16:00 PM

Oh yes, an uplifting pen indeed.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/20/2023 2:11:00 PM

Delightful ~

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/16/2023 2:30:00 PM

I trust, Paula, that these be the two chosen seasons if the choice had such a limit my friend, Aloha William

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2023 5:23:00 AM

I really like your Diamante Paula and also how Spring slips into Summer so creatively. Hope 2023 brings health and good cheer. Hugs, blessing, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:57:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. I am glad you like my Spring/Summer write. Yes, one slips into the next one so fast each year. Hope you have a great/blessed 2023. Hugs, Catch them. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/14/2023 9:13:00 PM

I must agree with Gershon lol! Two perfect delights to choose.

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/15/2023 3:38:00 PM

Agreed!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. I would like to add Fall to the mix. Spring/Fall are great times of the year. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2023 8:58:00 PM

If the climate just stayed there -- Spring and Summer -- you wouldn't hear any complaints from me!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:52:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. How about we add Fall??? Spring/Fall are the best to me. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 1/13/2023 7:27:00 PM

Sounds lovely Paula! I am so looking forward to the spring and summer. A delightful read for me this evening. Hugs Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:12:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you found my write delightful. I like Spring the best. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/13/2023 9:45:00 AM

Very nice to read, Paula.. It brightens a gray weather day here too :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:10:00 PM

Thank You, for writing. So glad I could brighten your gray day. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/12/2023 10:46:00 PM

Love the seasonal contrasts, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2023 6:41:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this seasonal contrast write. Both Spring & summer are a ton of fun. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/12/2023 4:15:00 PM

Oh yes, this speaks of that summer fun.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Oh yes, Spring & Summer fun is for me. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/12/2023 3:38:00 PM

I love both seasons equally Paula, each has their charm, thank you for the poem, keep well, share often :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2023 6:38:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my write. I also enjoy both Spring & summer. I think Spring a little more. Have a blessed day and write on.........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/12/2023 12:24:00 PM

I liked your writing, Paula. You conveyed a great juxtaposition between summer and spring with fine word choice and imagery. Good luck with the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/12/2023 1:36:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun Diamante write. I enjoyed writing this different poem. Guess Spring will be here before we know it, then on to Summer. Have a blessed day and write on.........................