Spring Vs Summer

Spring
rainy, cool
awaking, flowering, singing
yards, mountains, sea, sand
swimming, picnicking, sunning
hot, fun
summer
Date Written 1/12/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Oh yes, an uplifting pen indeed.
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Delightful ~
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 2:30 PM
I trust, Paula, that these be the two chosen seasons if the choice had such a limit my friend, Aloha William
Proxenos Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 5:23 AM
I really like your Diamante Paula and also how Spring slips into Summer so creatively. Hope 2023 brings health and good cheer. Hugs, blessing, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 6:57 AM
Thank You, for writing. I am glad you like my Spring/Summer write. Yes, one slips into the next one so fast each year. Hope you have a great/blessed 2023. Hugs, Catch them. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Thomas Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 9:13 PM
I must agree with Gershon lol! Two perfect delights to choose.
Thomas Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Agreed!!!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 6:54 AM
Thank You, for writing. I would like to add Fall to the mix. Spring/Fall are great times of the year. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Wolf Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 8:58 PM
If the climate just stayed there -- Spring and Summer -- you wouldn't hear any complaints from me!!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Thank You, for writing. How about we add Fall??? Spring/Fall are the best to me. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Sangster - K Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:27 PM
Sounds lovely Paula! I am so looking forward to the spring and summer. A delightful read for me this evening. Hugs Anne :-)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you found my write delightful. I like Spring the best. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Sands Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 9:45 AM
Very nice to read, Paula.. It brightens a gray weather day here too :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Thank You, for writing. So glad I could brighten your gray day. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Daniel Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 10:46 PM
Love the seasonal contrasts, Paula:)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this seasonal contrast write. Both Spring & summer are a ton of fun. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Kiser Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 4:15 PM
Oh yes, this speaks of that summer fun.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:39 AM
Thank You, for writing. Oh yes, Spring & Summer fun is for me. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Rose  Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 3:38 PM
I love both seasons equally Paula, each has their charm, thank you for the poem, keep well, share often :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like my write. I also enjoy both Spring & summer. I think Spring a little more. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
Poet Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:24 PM
I liked your writing, Paula. You conveyed a great juxtaposition between summer and spring with fine word choice and imagery. Good luck with the contest
Goldsmith Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun Diamante write. I enjoyed writing this different poem. Guess Spring will be here before we know it, then on to Summer. Have a blessed day and write on.........................
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