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Spring Versus Autumn By Robert and Vienna

the ice is melting in the streams through the meadow where new growth appears fragrant hyacinths push their way up from the ground to meet the spring sun some bright pink blossoms are budding in the branches of a cherry tree. some yellow tulips and yellow honeysuckles mimic the sunshine birds are coming back from their dwellings in the south where they spend winter there’s a sky of blue life spawns in every hue colorful season tiny leaves are falling a cold September morning time is slowing down freshly cut flowers arranged in crystal vase by the bay window the willow trees are acknowledging their season coming to an end red brick leaves mimic autumn's colors rich to dark a chocolate bird sings landing on a wire he recalls a summer flight huddled in the cold painted skies are grey life is about to unfold winters wake up call
First six written by Robert Pettit Last six written by Vienna Bombardieri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/21/2012 11:21:00 PM
wow... you 2 are awesome for doing them in haiku's... I added the battle to my latest contest... hope to see you join...always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/16/2012 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 6:05:00 PM
wow, you formatted it differently, but it READS as GREAT both ways!! You guys did splendidly together. Big congrats to you, Robert.
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Date: 1/14/2012 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful imagery throughout :)
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:41:00 AM
Congrats for your placement in the contest, loved, bl
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:46:00 PM
Hi Robert, like what I told Vie, I found it so cool that this is a series of haiku! I really enjoyed the contrast and descriptions that you put in here for spring and autumn! Super congrats to you and Vie, Robert :D
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Date: 1/13/2012 12:00:00 PM
what a superb team up!... congrats big time to you, vie and robert..:) huggs
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Date: 1/13/2012 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:05:00 AM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH MY DEAR FRIEND VIENNA.. AMAZING ENTRY.. CREATIVE STYLES BLEND SO WELL...
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Date: 1/11/2012 10:51:00 PM
good luck to the both of you in the contest , lovely imagery in your beautiful entry
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