Spring Versus Autumn By Robert and Vienna

the ice is melting in the streams through the meadow where new growth appears fragrant hyacinths push their way up from the ground to meet the spring sun some bright pink blossoms are budding in the branches of a cherry tree. some yellow tulips and yellow honeysuckles mimic the sunshine birds are coming back from their dwellings in the south where they spend winter there’s a sky of blue life spawns in every hue colorful season tiny leaves are falling a cold September morning time is slowing down freshly cut flowers arranged in crystal vase by the bay window the willow trees are acknowledging their season coming to an end red brick leaves mimic autumn's colors rich to dark a chocolate bird sings landing on a wire he recalls a summer flight huddled in the cold painted skies are grey life is about to unfold winters wake up call
First six written by Robert Pettit Last six written by Vienna Bombardieri
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 11:21 PM
wow... you 2 are awesome for doing them in haiku's... I added the battle to my latest contest... hope to see you join...always,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Robert. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 6:05 PM
wow, you formatted it differently, but it READS as GREAT both ways!! You guys did splendidly together. Big congrats to you, Robert.
Susan Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful imagery throughout :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:41 AM
Congrats for your placement in the contest, loved, bl
K. Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Hi Robert, like what I told Vie, I found it so cool that this is a series of haiku! I really enjoyed the contrast and descriptions that you put in here for spring and autumn! Super congrats to you and Vie, Robert :D
Onclaud Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 12:00 PM
what a superb team up!... congrats big time to you, vie and robert..:) huggs
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your joint win x
Sweetheart Avatar
January 13, 2012 at 9:05 AM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH MY DEAR FRIEND VIENNA.. AMAZING ENTRY.. CREATIVE STYLES BLEND SO WELL...
Roberts Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 10:51 PM
good luck to the both of you in the contest , lovely imagery in your beautiful entry
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