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spring uprising

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spring uprising

winter leaving
smells of spring uprising --
exuberant

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/5/2012 1:24:00 PM
Nice.
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Date: 3/4/2012 7:40:00 PM
I like the way you use a few words to paint a strong picture. Looking forward to more "smells of spring uprising." Thank you for your support regarding my poems.
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:47:00 AM
Words are dancing along with the rhythm of winter leaving wonderfully where exuberant of spring uprising lives it's life. Nice expression of Spring uprising, loved always, bl
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Date: 2/29/2012 11:21:00 PM
you deck spring with delicately-laced words, carol... a winner for me, definitely!.. thanks for a fun bunny contest; glad to be part of it.. :) more huggs!
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:55:00 PM
Glorious picture of spring, Carol and you are sure inspired spring thoughts with the bunny contest too!
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:48:00 PM
Such simplicity but you've grasped it fully. Spring is here and exuberant it is. Beautiful write carol :) Taylor
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful portrayal :)
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:32:00 PM
cooler summer is this way, looking for autumn, shortly hey, thank you for my prize, incidently, sorry 4 the sadness bunn-ne ... but it is a crime...downunder all the time... greed for grass the rich have see...
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Date: 2/29/2012 5:20:00 PM
For sure my friend, hope you are doing well. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/29/2012 4:34:00 PM
Great thoughts penned about spring that are a reminder that it is a delightful season..If for a contest, reads like winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..It is trying to be spring here in Georgia with the pines beginning to put their pollen out and making me sick..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:18:00 PM
exactly my sentiments Carol .. a delightful portrait of i,aginative words.. good luck in contest.. and thankxx for clarification of new contest too.. thankxx to TPS but they informed me they cannot fix my back key at this time.. so difficult to congratulate winners .. oh..
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:51:00 PM
Love your Haiku Carol Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:52:00 PM
Wow, what a great modern haiku, Carol. Guess we all feel better when spring arrives. Very nice, my friend. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/29/2012 12:49:00 PM
Yes, spring is in the air. A lovely poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/29/2012 7:30:00 AM
I agree with this haiku, Carol....move over winter! It's Spring's turn now!! Love the newest avatar...def not as cute as that grand-baby though. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 2/29/2012 6:55:00 AM
Beautiful spring haiku Carol it is a pleasure to read it.Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/28/2012 2:35:00 PM
Yes, Spring in in the air and like you said it is uprising! I'm, "looking forward" to, "winter leaving" and Spring arriving! This is a wonderful write that I have read this afternoon my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/28/2012 1:48:00 PM
lovely haiku, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:33:00 PM
I love your haiku Carol, I am looking forward too.. thanks for all your wonderful comments
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:28:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Carol, I enjoyed reading your poetry.
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Date: 2/28/2012 12:12:00 PM
This is for Charles' contest. I hope it is done correctly. Love, Carol
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