Sidney Beck Poet Quintain (English)

Spring Stream

SPRING   STREAM


 
Sun be-gifts his daughter  running through the morning cold :

Her fresh-washed charm is a girl in her first dress of spring.

Dawn draws the purple veil from the sky, flooding the stream with gold,

And diamonds of the first water, urging her to laugh and dance and swing.

Free at last to run on her joyful way to the ocean, she starts to  sing.


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Written for  Francine Roberts'  Contest  "Wow Me in 5 Lines"

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 27, 2011 at 4:50 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sydney. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown April 26, 2011 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on your win Sydney in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 25, 2011 at 8:03 AM Congrats Syd on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a wonderful one to share with us all my friend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta April 25, 2011 at 7:12 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Sydney

Gautami Phookan April 24, 2011 at 8:12 AM Congrats Sydney on your 2nd place win with this very beautiful depiction of stream..Love,Gautami

Carrie Richards April 24, 2011 at 8:03 AM So lovely and uplifting is this wonderful poem!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!! :)

Debbie Guzzi April 24, 2011 at 6:40 AM Go Syd! HUZZAH on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud April 24, 2011 at 6:40 AM a round of cheers for this winnning piece, syd... more power to you!:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2011 at 12:08 AM Such imagery, Sydney. a very well deserved win.

John Freeman April 23, 2011 at 9:38 PM Great to see you at the top again Sydney. Congratulations on your second spot. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson April 23, 2011 at 7:06 PM Provacatively beautiful words. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels April 23, 2011 at 6:38 PM Stunning images Sydney, congratulations on your win ;)

Carolyn Devonshire April 23, 2011 at 6:28 PM Beautiful images of your daughter, Syd. Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts April 23, 2011 at 6:15 PM congrats Sydney on your second place win in the Wow Me contest, love this , you always flow so melodically

Gautami Phookan April 20, 2011 at 11:37 AM WOW!!! Stunningly beautiful write.just loved this sooomuch Sydney.Good luck in the contest.Love,Gautami