Spring Stream

moving mirror shines
                      captures sunlit Sakura
                      doubles her beauty



 For 'Haiku theme: water' contest, sponsor Mick Talbot
March 6th 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 4:36 PM
It's cherry blossom time where I live, festival going on... especially enjoyed! bbn
Rodrigues Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 7:33 PM
A lovely image, Viv!
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 2:47 PM
I love the reflected image of the beautiful Sakura, Viv. Winning material! Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 3:14 PM
simple gorgeous. Maybe the best one I have seen yet for this contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Charming haiku, Viv.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Beautiful!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 4:42 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Allison Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Wow Mr Viv this is stunning! I hope Mick loves it like I do:-) hugs Jan xx
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