Spring Stormclouds

storm
                   violent, furious
         raging, brewing, intensifying
      hurricane, tornado, raindrops, sky
            floating, lingering, rolling
                      white, gray
                         clouds



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Spring Or Summer Diamante Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger
Date written: 05/06/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Wow ~ flows beautifully. Absolutely beautiful, Edward. Never been a big fan of the form but you blew this one out of the water. A FAVE for me.
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 12:58 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and FAVE, Line:-)
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Your descriptions and imagery evoke the force of progressively intensifying storm--just as intended.
Ibeh Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
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