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Spring Storm

Dance of a spring storm brought some rain along Sparkling mountain tops with glitters of charms Decorating foothill trees with fluffs of knick-knacks Caressing blooming plants with respect from heart Adding further to rivers, reservoirs, creeks and ponds Carrying exuberance to rejoice, appreciate and dance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/7/2021 2:22:00 PM
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Hey--you are making it all alive...the earth as a unified organism. Good view of our beautiful planet's nice features!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/17/2021 2:20:00 PM
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Such lovely glimpses of nature's dance, amid spring's joyous rhythms. I see the jubilation in your splendid poem, Smita.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/20/2021 9:30:00 AM
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"Jubilation" You are so right Vijay! Thank you :)
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Supraja Kannan
Date: 5/17/2021 5:47:00 AM
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That's so beautiful... Great imagery... I loved reading it, Smita
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/17/2021 12:37:00 PM
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Glad that you enjoyed the poem Supraja! Thank you for your sweet comment!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 5/13/2021 8:25:00 AM
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Beautiful verses on spring.. and lovely imagery Smita... Hugs.. ~ Ani
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/17/2021 12:36:00 PM
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So nice of you to stop by Ani! Thank you!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2021 12:07:00 PM
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I really enjoy this and I love mountains too. I like your line...sparkling mountain tops with glitters of charms. Excellent :)
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/17/2021 12:36:00 PM
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Thanks for visiting Heidi!
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W.A. Cholt
Date: 5/7/2021 5:23:00 PM
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Nice description of a spring storm and the picture it creates on the surrounding landscape.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/10/2021 10:30:00 AM
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Thank you! I exactly described it as I saw it :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/5/2021 2:04:00 PM
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this is really nice work. I enjoyed your personification of spring.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 5/10/2021 10:29:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea :)

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