Spring Storm

Dance of a spring storm brought some rain along
Sparkling mountain tops with glitters of charms
Decorating foothill trees with fluffs of knick-knacks
Caressing blooming plants with respect from heart
Adding further to rivers, reservoirs, creeks and ponds
Carrying exuberance to rejoice, appreciate and dance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Beaufort Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Hey--you are making it all alive...the earth as a unified organism. Good view of our beautiful planet's nice features!!
Pandit Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Such lovely glimpses of nature's dance, amid spring's joyous rhythms. I see the jubilation in your splendid poem, Smita.
Kulkarni Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 9:30 AM
"Jubilation" You are so right Vijay! Thank you :)
Kannan Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 5:47 AM
That's so beautiful... Great imagery... I loved reading it, Smita
Kulkarni Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Glad that you enjoyed the poem Supraja! Thank you for your sweet comment!
Jayasankar Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Beautiful verses on spring.. and lovely imagery Smita... Hugs.. ~ Ani
Kulkarni Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 12:36 PM
So nice of you to stop by Ani! Thank you!
Sands Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 12:07 PM
I really enjoy this and I love mountains too. I like your line...sparkling mountain tops with glitters of charms. Excellent :)
Kulkarni Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for visiting Heidi!
Cholt Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Nice description of a spring storm and the picture it creates on the surrounding landscape.
Kulkarni Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:30 AM
Thank you! I exactly described it as I saw it :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 2:04 PM
this is really nice work. I enjoyed your personification of spring.
Kulkarni Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
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