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Spring Storm

quote real disgusting forecast on the horizon ice and heavy snow nb. This is absolute plagiarism The Weather Network Local Forecast

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2018 8:08:00 AM

This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/28/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Funom :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2018 10:42:00 PM

Remember the Alamo! And remember the '60's and '70's Weathermen -- they were terrorists. But forget about this weatherman. He only haiku'd what he got off of his print-out. He couldn't do one himself if somebody gave him the first 16 syllables on a snow day....LOL You be my weather-babe, Maureen. Time to bring the heat! It's supposed to be Spring! (Pretty amusing for a square like me, eh? ) You da best, :)gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/16/2018 9:04:00 AM

I don't know, local weather man's pretty quippy. You bet I'm a weather babe. Seasoned, allweathered. I ordered spring, I knew I should have used Purolator. ;p xomo!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/14/2018 11:21:00 AM

ohh, so these weatherman can write a haiku... fun, fun but.. not the ice/ snow, maureen.. huggs

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 11:38:00 AM

Nah ;) that would be awesome though. I just plucked the seventeen from the clip.

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/14/2018 9:07:00 AM

Lol love the note! Had no idea they were poets Maureen ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 10:21:00 AM

They certainly have a sense of humour ;) xomo!

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/14/2018 6:16:00 AM

Confounds the kigo seasonal list, for you write of winter weather, yet as we know it is spring. You make a good point... Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 6:42:00 AM

I almost titled it Weather Man Says, but then spring would indeed be lost. mo

Chuck Melugin

Date: 4/14/2018 5:24:00 AM

Dear Maureen....Tomorrow...Tomorrow...I love you...Tomorrow...You're only a day....away! Stay warm as the snow birds swarm!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 7:14:00 AM

Ha! Clearing away the cobwebs and the sorrow, so far so good. xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2018 5:51:00 PM

I like that note at the end too!!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 7:15:00 AM

Tee hee :) so far no real disgusting, just mildly ugly.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/13/2018 4:14:00 PM

Not the type of weather we look forward to in Spring, Maureen! Unfortunately modern weather forecasts can't be taken with a pinch of salt! Regards // paul

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/14/2018 7:18:00 AM

True dat. WARM wishes to you Paul :) xomo!