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Spring Stirs

Pent-up hearts release longing sighs Winter's paused to reveal blue skies Spring stirs for a moment, then wonders When snowfalls will tear her asunder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/24/2020 7:36:00 PM
A sweet, quick taste of spring, like a strange girl's kiss, alas, gone too soon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2020 2:29:00 AM
You, my friend, are no false prophet! Here comes OMW, roaring back to Chicago...
Date: 2/23/2020 11:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem.. Wonderful imagery.. The way you describe the short pause in winder snow is fantastic..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/24/2020 4:40:00 PM
Aw, you are just too kind to me, Jenish. Thank you! :) Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 6:51:00 PM
That stirring, the tense moment...will the weather lay down her fine green carpet...put the snow white one away.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 7:59:00 PM
Ha, ha. Snow's rolled away for a few days. We'll take it! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 2/23/2020 5:54:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, it is mother's natures tease. It will snow again. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/24/2020 12:46:00 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, it is a Spring thaw here where I am. I know it is a tease. The snow will come. I am enjoying it. have a nice day my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 6:00:00 PM
You are exactly right. This is a short lived break, but I am very happy to take it. Here's to happiness, Darlene! :) gw
Date: 2/23/2020 3:52:00 PM
Hoping you get a respite from the winter doldrums - you have crafted a tantalizing taste of spring!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/23/2020 5:58:00 PM
Yup. Got a respite this weekend. High 40's and 50's, and the snow melted. This week? -- Back comes winter. Here's to Health, Happiness, and Spring! :) gw

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