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Spring Steam

. Burrrrrr That Spring that backs press hard about twenty toes mingle fingers too cold to caress those shifting hips Mmmm that Spring steam from that Spring tea and through the window that blazing Spring's morning sun beaming on her glowing happy pink face

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Constance La France

Date: 7/20/2015 9:10:00 AM

James, very nice write and thanks for visiting my poem, Senryu 13, animal abuse and your comment, so appreciated and of course you can share it

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/16/2014 12:55:00 AM

Such an easy reading piece from you here dear James, all real pleasure to read today..'

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/4/2014 12:45:00 PM

You are a romantic.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2013 11:20:00 AM

been a while, james... nice to read something so cool and downright natural from you... love this!...:) huggs

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/16/2013 4:07:00 PM

Gripping poem. I really enjoyed reading (: I hope you are doing well. Always, Laura

Daver Austin

Date: 6/22/2013 11:02:00 AM

Just saying hello again. Andrea Dietrich thinks your picture looks like Moses. Now that I think about it.............Love, daver

Elai Cee

Date: 5/24/2013 7:21:00 PM

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Elai Cee

Date: 5/24/2013 7:18:00 PM

Hi great poet, James. your work hits some piece of William Wordsworth! expressive feelings for a beautiful lady!---bow down--looking with sweet smile---Elai

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/24/2013 11:51:00 AM

Hello James, my name is Phillip (Flipper to my friends and you are a friend.) I am Chef's proxy wile he is in the hospital. You know Chef as HGarvey Daniel Esquire, HG, Harry, or Liege. I am from the Culinary side of Harry's talent. All of the poets on Poetrysoup love him as do all his students. He is coming home tomorrow (Sat.) Your response to Chef's Poem "Dear POETRYSOUP" is very moving. I wrote a blog inspired by Gail Angel Doyle's contest Reflections of You Please read Respectfuly Flipper

Daver Austin

Date: 5/24/2013 9:08:00 AM

Thanks for checking out my stuff. I doubt there is anything of yours I haven't seen, so why not some more fine poetry from Sir James? Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/24/2013 7:10:00 AM

Read this one again..I missed the boiling tea before..Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/12/2013 6:15:00 AM

Delightful read this morn' JP! Thanks! Jimbo

Daver Austin

Date: 4/27/2013 9:51:00 AM

The portrait is by Cornelia Kuemmel, an American artist and is on page 95 of American Art Review - a fine magazine. I've subscribed for years. Love, daver

Diane Christian

Date: 4/26/2013 11:35:00 AM

nice poem and spring has sprung so lovley, thanks for your kind comments on my poem sisters, sadly only two of my 4 sisters also believe in God so hopefully one day the other 2 will follow, but we still care about each other even though we dont get chance to keep in touch often, thanks James was lovley eharing from you again havea gret day diane

Daver Austin

Date: 4/26/2013 8:54:00 AM

Nice cup of spring tea, Sir James. Love the energy of your message. So you've seen the painting, "The Kreutzer Sonata." However, it wasn't the famous painting that inspired my poem, but another by an artist I've never heard of. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/26/2013 6:55:00 AM

It reads as though spring hasn't quite gotten there yet..Enjoyed reading this very expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..I think that I had finished my work "Watchman" when you read it but if not it is finished now..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2013 6:32:00 PM

nice and WARM poem, JAmes. And don't forgot to finish with inglorious food. heehee. Luv, andrea