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Spring Steam

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                 Burrrrrr
          That Spring that
     backs press hard about
         twenty toes mingle
 fingers too cold to caress those
              shifting hips

                 Mmmm
          that Spring steam
                   from
            that Spring tea
      and through the window
that blazing Spring's morning sun
            beaming on her
                  glowing
                   happy
                 pink face

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Constance La France

July 20, 2015 at 9:10 AM

James, very nice write and thanks for visiting my poem, Senryu 13, animal abuse and your comment, so appreciated and of course you can share it

Joe Maverick

June 16, 2014 at 12:55 AM

Such an easy reading piece from you here dear James, all real pleasure to read today..'

Richard Lamoureux

January 4, 2014 at 12:45 PM

You are a romantic.

Nette Onclaud

August 11, 2013 at 11:20 AM

been a while, james... nice to read something so cool and downright natural from you... love this!...:) huggs

Laura Breidenthal

July 16, 2013 at 4:07 PM

Gripping poem. I really enjoyed reading (: I hope you are doing well. Always, Laura

Daver Austin

June 22, 2013 at 11:02 AM

Just saying hello again. Andrea Dietrich thinks your picture looks like Moses. Now that I think about it.............Love, daver

Elai Cee

May 24, 2013 at 7:21 PM

hope u can visit my page and glaring u'r comments to learn more !

Elai Cee

May 24, 2013 at 7:18 PM

Hi great poet, James. your work hits some piece of William Wordsworth! expressive feelings for a beautiful lady!---bow down--looking with sweet smile---Elai

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

May 24, 2013 at 11:51 AM

Hello James, my name is Phillip (Flipper to my friends and you are a friend.) I am Chef's proxy wile he is in the hospital. You know Chef as HGarvey Daniel Esquire, HG, Harry, or Liege. I am from the Culinary side of Harry's talent. All of the poets on Poetrysoup love him as do all his students. He is coming home tomorrow (Sat.) Your response to Chef's Poem "Dear POETRYSOUP" is very moving. I wrote a blog inspired by Gail Angel Doyle's contest Reflections of You Please read Respectfuly Flipper

Daver Austin

May 24, 2013 at 9:08 AM

Thanks for checking out my stuff. I doubt there is anything of yours I haven't seen, so why not some more fine poetry from Sir James? Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

May 24, 2013 at 7:10 AM

Read this one again..I missed the boiling tea before..Sara

James Marshall Goff

May 12, 2013 at 6:15 AM

Delightful read this morn' JP! Thanks! Jimbo

Daver Austin

April 27, 2013 at 9:51 AM

The portrait is by Cornelia Kuemmel, an American artist and is on page 95 of American Art Review - a fine magazine. I've subscribed for years. Love, daver

Diane Christian

April 26, 2013 at 11:35 AM

nice poem and spring has sprung so lovley, thanks for your kind comments on my poem sisters, sadly only two of my 4 sisters also believe in God so hopefully one day the other 2 will follow, but we still care about each other even though we dont get chance to keep in touch often, thanks James was lovley eharing from you again havea gret day diane

Daver Austin

April 26, 2013 at 8:54 AM

Nice cup of spring tea, Sir James. Love the energy of your message. So you've seen the painting, "The Kreutzer Sonata." However, it wasn't the famous painting that inspired my poem, but another by an artist I've never heard of. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2013 at 6:55 AM

It reads as though spring hasn't quite gotten there yet..Enjoyed reading this very expressive and descriptive work..Thanks for stopping by..I think that I had finished my work "Watchman" when you read it but if not it is finished now..Sara