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Spring Song - the Haiku Style

~Spring Song~ (Triple Haiku) Beautiful flowers to the bright sunlight open up winters gone now Swans in the pond glide water shimmers in the sun flock of robins fly Roses give their perfume butterflies dance happily spring laughs with delight Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011
March.04.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain-
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March 5, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Hello "D" -- What a marvelous write indeed!! Flowers, Swans, and Roses are the perfect lead-in's for each Haiku entry. And your quote from "Mark Twain" (one of my all-time favorites) is perfect!! And the photos!! You're brilliant at the way you always orchestrate their place for both power and effect in consonance with the various themes you write about!! What can I say, except this one is a Gigantic-Super "7" -- and goes immediately into my Book of FAVs!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me!! "G"
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