Frances Schiavina Poet Haibun

Spring Song

Earth white flash suntanned brown
sweats snow droplets into the soil
softening heart's silence into a song
spring time joy is back 
with blossoms, gentle breezes
bird song melodies



Tenth Place Winner: A Brian Strand Premiere No 1214

First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-2/21/23

First Place Winner: Brian Strand- All Yours-4/7/21

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Susan Ashley May 7, 2023 at 8:49 AM Dear Frances, congratulations for your wonderful win in Brain's contest with your lovely Spring Song. Indeed, "spring time joy is back"! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Len Gasun May 7, 2023 at 2:34 AM So lovely and calming to the soul my dear poet frend Frances. Congratulations on your win/s! I enjoyed your poem immensely. Thanks a lot for sharing. Hugs

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2023 at 7:53 AM Congratulations on this winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Gordon Mcconnell July 6, 2021 at 1:29 PM Nice one Frances, good imagery and insightful thought too.

Brian Sambourne May 25, 2021 at 5:42 PM Another winner, Frances. Your poetry soars. Best wishes, Brian

Janice Canerdy April 22, 2021 at 5:25 PM Light and lovely, Frances. Janice