Home » Poems » John Heck » Spring Sonata

Spring Sonata

Tiger lillies trill Notes pervade overcast skies Roaring with color

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Patrick Cornwall

Date: 4/27/2012 6:42:00 AM

congrats on haiku being featured...Patrick

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/24/2012 7:07:00 PM

Congrats John on your haiku being featured. Multi-talented!!

Cayetano Young

Date: 8/8/2008 7:34:00 PM

congratulations Sir John on your win on Mister Strand's contest. Very well deserved ( do i need to spew that? ). My worries on my submission of poems if they have reached you. I'm still waiting for your reply. much respect and adoration, GiNO P.S my prayers on your books. I'm pretty sure that it'll be a shoo-in! wink! (pardon my last comment. Did not proofread. Feel free to erase it.)

Cayetano Young

Date: 8/8/2008 7:29:00 PM

congratulatrions sir john on your win mr. strand's contest. very well dederve( do i need to spew that?) i am quite worried if my submission of poems has reached you. i'm still waiting for your reply. much respect and adotaion, GiNo P.S my prayers on your books. i'm pretty sure that it'll be a shoo-in! wink!

James Foulk

Date: 8/1/2008 11:00:00 AM

yes a great haiku. very well penned

Robert Kent

Date: 7/30/2008 10:52:00 AM

Very cool, I like your style. A friend recommended I read your poetry. This was magnificent, as are your other works! Health and happiness, Bob

Alana Tye

Date: 7/30/2008 1:18:00 AM

Now I will see Tiger lillies in a more beautiful way! Thank you for sharing this lovely haiku. :) -Alana

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/24/2008 3:46:00 PM

Oh how I have missed you and your poems. This is totally captivating. Very well done, my friend. Love Heidie

Adell Foster

Date: 7/23/2008 8:02:00 AM

The imagery of this haiku is truly exquite, one could truly envision the beauty of Tiger lillies. witten in perfect meter. Thank you John for sharing the read and Good luck with the contest. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Sara Lokken

Date: 7/21/2008 11:31:00 AM

A beautiful haiku. Breathtaking imagery--sure is great to see you posting again! Regards, Sara:)

Farah Chamma

Date: 7/18/2008 8:02:00 AM

That's a wonderful Haiku John..Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah

Jim Wilson

Date: 7/18/2008 7:13:00 AM

I enjoyed this. I like line 3; it reminds me of the Haiku of Richard Wright.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 7/18/2008 4:03:00 AM

I have many in my years roaring as we speak. Well done haiku, and good luck in Brian's contest. Good to see you back, Love Kristin

C. E. Mcmullin

Date: 7/17/2008 7:05:00 PM

Excellent use of form, John! I love the way you have given a voice to a flower, bringing out its unpretentious beauty- Should be a winner- Mac

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/17/2008 12:39:00 PM

Excellent in form my friend and the desctiptive quality of the write provides magnificent imagery. Good luck in the contest. Michael