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Poetic Form: Free Verse
Inspired: 2024 March 09
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The Solar Spring is breathtaking sending out itself everywhere a sense of renewal is arising, growing, budding, and blooming. The groundbreaking is taxing the granules of rich earthen sod as new life seeks out the world above and the waiting wonder. Aurorean presence breaks dawn light relishing the early share as morning spreads the atmosphere rummaging goes on below. Snowdrops pierce a melting frost and Sweet Alyssum edges on the blossoms of mostly white and hints of green drooping down Further onwards the tiny flowerets of Alyssum's scent air swell and in the rears just above ground in striking colors are pansies. The grand boulevard of a bustling town a ways from the hey-day as an array of color-filled flowers like Daffodils being light in color. There are bold blue-colored Bluebonnet stems standing in rows and immediate to them are purple Sunflowers, --they're purplish. Scattered about is a display of different hues of tall Spider Lillies on the whole, I'm impressed with our tiny town's achievements. I can say that with a measure of certainty that memories serve of Bath, Maine circa 1970 + a dog after a chicken + a town after a dog.

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Date: 3/9/2024 4:48:00 PM
absolutely magnificent imagery!!!! Every line is exquisite and flows smoothly to the next. What a beautiful place Bath, Maine, must be even still. I felt as if I was actually there. Am faving...have a great evening, Sara PS best wishes with the contest
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Date: 3/9/2024 5:56:00 PM
I hope I didn't get the particulars mixed-up between Sara Ks & JCBs contest--one flowery and one not--c'est la vie, mon amie, Sara. Merci, fave, mon cherie, Au revoir, William

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